Hehe point to Jackie Tyler. That was a clever play her to get them to open up. Doctor and Rose in the TARDIS as it should be.

Another very nice story. Though the doctor being out witted by one Jackie Tyler is something to be highly amused by.

Beautiful! While I can acknowledge that Jackie and AU Pete can build a very happy life together in Pete's World, it's nice to have a story where she stays and gives Rose that tie to home. And of course it's always fun to read about the aftermath to Torchwood when they manage to stay together.

I love this story

You managed a completed story without a bunch of loose ends, well done!