Asso I'm so glad you updated your story. This is one story I've been looking forward to seeing updated. I liked how Peresephone and Hades relationship is portrayed in your story is getting really good. I look forward to reading your next update soon.

I didn't have internet for a week but heartened to find a new chapter. The machinations of Zeus and Hera are entertaining and, of course, I am a fan of your portrayal of Hades. Very enjoyable.

Asso I'm glad you updated this story. I don't blame Hermes for being nervous about confronting Demeter and asking her to stop the out of control seasons an stopping what she's doing. And Peresephone andHades traveling around his kingdom was well written.

So good! I hope you continue! I can’t wait to read more.

Brothers in collusion. Love under fire. Poor Hades. Glad to have this back.

Wonderful chapter Asso I really thought it was good to see Peresephone understands about becoming Hades queen and all that entails and exploring his kingdom.

I've missed this story. I especially applaud the portrayal of Hades and his relationship with Persephone. Well done, my friend.

Winter is affecting the Gods and Demeter is taking her revenge against Zeus. The gods and mortals are all being affected by it. Peresephone is realizing what a large realm tatarus is with Hades and it's a very decsriptive chapter. I look forward to reading your next cahapter soon.

Winter has come. I love how they now look for answer to the Kingdom of the Dead. Oh, and nice having Poseidon join this mythic story. I'm glad it's back.

Asso I really liked this chapter alot Demeter is angry at Zeus and now it's winter everywhere and everyone is going to suffer from her wrath.I really like Peresephone an Hades going to explore his kingdom. Zeus is going to have deal with the mess he made of things by lying to Demeter about what happened to Peresephone.

I continue to love the juxtaposing of Zeus and Hades and Persephone.

I really liked this chapter lot alot of major revelations about Zeus allowing Hades to take Peresephone was well makes even Zeus having to make different choices. Demeter is going to take her revenge on Zeus because he lied to her.

I love Perspehone and Hades relationship is wonderful, while the machinations of of Hera, Zeus and the rest are entertaining. Well done, my friend.

Asso I really like seeing Demeter confront Zeus about Peresephone's disappearence and Helios being afraid to tell the truth of what he has seen. Was well written. I look forward to finding out what happens to Peresephone in your next chapter.

First off. I'm glad this is back. Now, the craven behavior of Zeus and Demeter and Hera scheming and self-righteous - perfect. But the best of all is the love between Persephone and Hades. Highly, enjoyable my friend.