Interesting story, I didn't really like Demetri or Bella for that matter, I liked Luna and Peter

This is a great story. This is my second reading of it and I enjoyed it as much as the first time. Thanks for writing and sharing.

Kick Ass story! Thanks for sharing

at first i really wasn't sure about demetri but I was bored so I clicked on this and IM SO GLAD I DID! This was so fun and dramatic I loved this plot and how you set uo the volturi, very different from how people usually set thwm up

Loved this!️️️️️

Loved it! Great job!

great story :)

omg forgot how good this story was. I was reading another Demitri and Bella pairing yesterday and this 1 popped in my head and I couldn't remember name. I went thru every story of same pairing 2day looking for it am I'm so glad I did. definitely recommend 2 everyone

Loved reading this again Demetri . Thank you for sharing.

The story is dark and very well written but I still feel like Bella doesn't have enough agency. Maybe it's because she was human and turned by Demetri. It still feel like her choices aren't her choice ? If she was already a vampire in a relationship with edward, it would have been more harder for Demetri to have her but she would have some agency. It's very unbalanced between Demetri and Bella.

Edward and Demetri are both shitty in their own way but Demetri never pretends to be a saint.

But I love this story and what you did with the Volturi and Demetri. I'm glad about Jasper.
It was an epic story.

I really enjoy the way you have written Bella and Demetri !

Thanks for sharing this amazing story !

Loved it!

Awesome story, I just love Demetri. Thank you for sharing.

I absolutely love this:)

This was a fantastic read well done

Great story.