you win

This is pretty good.

I don’t know if you will see this but I have just spent the last week going through such incredible stress getting through this fanfic in the past week, I DID love it but I kept on reading hoping for some kind of happiness for Nny and Edgar and then it just didn’t end... I’m devastated I was wondering if you could tell me if you plan to post any more chapters I really really need to know how this ends for them

Please don't be done with this fic yet. This is probably my 6th or 7th read through. Hopefully it hasn't been forgotten, it's one of my all-time favorites!

I'll still wait, despite knowing you're not going to update. And right before the ending too (I assume). :( Such a great story being abandoned, sad.

First of all how dare you

Wow! This is AMAZING! I hope you update again soon. I can't wait to see what happens next.

lOUD SCREAMING

Wow.

This has to be one of the greatest stories I've ever read for JTHM. The only two other things that come close to comparison are "Rumors of my Demise" and "The Change".

Honestly great job. I just wish this archive was as popular as its relative IZ fanfiction wise so this story could get some more spotlight.

I happily await more. Great job.

Oh please don't be the end of the story! The feels!

Oh man, I don't even know how to feel anymore. .. thus fic is so cerebral and confusing, but in a good way! From jthm and I feel sick, I know that people who come into close contact with nny sometimes get a voice in their head that manifests itself like the dough boys, and that that voice is from some outside source... maybe? It's really interesting how you chose to explore the relationship between a person and the entity inside his head... I'm just along for the emotional ride

Please god write more! This stories quality is amazing!

I spent the first twenty or thirty minutes just gushing to my gf about how excited I was to see you updated, it'd been so long that I was sure it'd joined the ranks of dead stories, still it's a favourite and one I revisit some of my favourite chapters every so often but MY GOD here is a new chapter, I just binge read it and my goodness I'm thrilled. You've done the impossible, you've gotten me emotionally invested in your oc, I love the relationship, the dynamic, this whole theme. URGH33 Thank you so much for this, it's one of two fics I'm dedicated to continue reading on here and it was just such a treat.

This is amazing, I love this story and these characters and I'm eager to continue reading. Absolutely enthralled. Very inspiring, cannot wait to see how the interaction with Nny is going to go. Keep up the good work babber!

This is amazing..
I do hope there will be more.
I.. I really have no words to accurately describe all I feel about this chapter.

So much pride in Todd!