I hate you so much at the end there, my heart freaking broke!

I laughed so much at reading this and that move everything an inch or so is the best prank EVER! Then of course the Lucy have the Gemini turn into Laxus was perfect

This chapter was beautiful! I love how Laxus was at that ball only because Gramps couldn't go, and how Laxus had given her the courage to leave and join Fairy Tail. The ending when the figures each other out was also adorable

Your writing is absolutely beautiful, every story captured me. I love this paring and hope you write about them again.

This chapter was very interesting to say the least. I wonder if any of the others participating in Lalu Ship Week will do a Modern AU, though one did for 'Tears'. Though you submitted this late in the week, you are the first to finish all of the prompts before the week's end. Ever single prompt entry was excellently written, and absolutely brilliant. Your idea for the first prompt, 'Masquerade', was inspiring; having Laxus and Lucy accidentally meet at a Masquerade Ball thrown in Lucy's honor to celebrate her 16th birthday, and for it have been Laxus, though Lucy didn't know it at the time, who inspired Lucy to finally break free from her gilded golden cage and seek-out her freedom. And then to have them eventual realize who the other was at another Masquerade Ball thrown by the Royal Family of Fiore. Your spin for 'War' was hilarious. The pranks that Lucy and Laxus pulled on each other were great, and then to have Gemini and Natsu out their feelings for each other. What you did for 'Tears' was interesting, but something I've seen in other fan-fics: Gray and Lucy have a FWB Relationship, Lucy starts falling for Gray, but the whole time Gray was also dating Juvia, then Laxus comes along and helps Lucy put herself back together and move on. What you wrote for 'Protect' was a bit cliché with the whole Dragon/Dragon Slayer Mates subject, but you did it in an original way so it wasn't an entire cliché on the subject making it really good. I already gave you my thoughts, more like ramblings, on your writing for 'Summer' so I won't get into that one again. Your idea for 'Falling' was amazing, and not something that any of the others who are writing for Lalu Ship Week thought of doing. Though I was/am a tad confused by what I'm guessing is a continuation for 'Falling'. And as for this final prompt, 'Father', I was sort of expecting something about Laxus and Lucy's individual "Daddy Issues". You know, how both of their fathers are greedy, overbearing, power-hungry, egomaniacs with little to no love in their hearts for their own children, and are willing to go to any lengths to cause them harm; whether emotionally or physically. But that isn't what you did. You did something completely original, and you set it in a Modern High School AU. This was actually the first of your writings that I've read, and if this is any indication of how good of a writer you are then I'm sure that I will enjoy your other works.

This was adorable! Very well thought out too I think aus are harder to write! Live long and prosper!

Excellent lemon. And the use of the ice cream in the foreplay; that is something that I've done before with an equally positive response, much like what Lucy gave Laxus. Whipped Cream, Reddi Wip or equivalent to be precise, is also good for use in foreplay - Whipped Cream Bikini comes to mind. (Ha! Ice Cream Whipped Cream Lemon Iced Lemon Meringue Pie. "Pie" being a slang superlative for a vagina.) Oh how I wish for the hot "Dog Days" of summer now, because it has been so frigidly cold lately where I live. Like getting down to -30 F at night. But I'm rambling. This was an excellent prompted short, and the lemon you wrote was equally excellent. Every thing you've written thus for this fic has been really good.

Fizzyyyyyyy this was super cool holy fucking shit! I enjoyed that on a whole new level, it was so creative and interesting! Girl, you've got some true talent there!

Yay! That was cute! Great way to end the week!

Loving these shorts. Is it odd that all I could think of with the foreplay and ice-cream was that it was a yeast infection waiting to happen?

I think out of everything I have read so far from you, I liked the first part of Falling the best. It was truly, honestly incredible, and I think you did an amazing job at this angst prompt my dear! Seriously, I felt that to my bones and in my spine, it was too good to be true!

Haha this really seems like something Laxus would do. It was adorable!

This was intense! And very beautiful.

God that was a good one! It is a shame more people don't write lemons like this one. Can't wait for the next chapter!

WELL NOW. That was unexpected to say the least. And sexy as all hell.