Reviews for Deathly Alternate
Jacob Phantom chapter 5 . 2/1
Please update your story soon!
4RCH4N63L chapter 4 . 11/24/2019
Your story is amazing and very well written. And i I have a suggestion though it's not on the story itself. You should put this story under as a crossover. It has so much involved with an anime even the main character that it confuses people who haven't seen the anime like me. I under stand you explain things but it's hard to understand what you mean if you don't watch the anime. But all the same your story is amazing and I love it even thou I get confused cause I haven seen the anime it crosses with.
devilltrigger92 chapter 5 . 7/25/2019
I think this story is dead. It's been 2 years since it was updated
Green223 chapter 5 . 7/19/2019
Hope this isn't dead
Time Emperor chapter 5 . 5/9/2019
MOOOOOOOOOOORE!
EdTheBeast chapter 5 . 3/28/2019
Excellent. Since Nyx, Death, Magic, & Hogwarts might be his, Violet & Hermione would be good together if she was that way also. Course, she could share with Harry & Violet.
EdTheBeast chapter 4 . 3/28/2019
So Dumbly is a manipulative bastard, or is he something else!
EdTheBeast chapter 3 . 3/28/2019
You forgot the Potter vault! A very well written chapter, with more twists!
EdTheBeast chapter 2 . 3/28/2019
Well done! Really liked the entire chapter!
EdTheBeast chapter 1 . 3/28/2019
This starts off with jumping into the middle, but the alternate universe, explains things.
AustrianShadow chapter 5 . 2/6/2019
Aloah,
as with the deathly Ashikabi, a shame that there is not more available to read, yet I hope?
BR
Shadow
Firemnwnb chapter 5 . 10/9/2018
It's been almost a Year since this was updated. It's now October of 2018..
willam and jack and jake chapter 5 . 9/24/2018
very well done can't wait to read more
willam and jack and jake chapter 4 . 9/24/2018
cool well done
willam and jack and jake chapter 3 . 9/23/2018
interesting well done
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