Reviews for Assassin's Creed: Transcendence
Jaybird9876 chapter 61 . 7/14
One question: is this Lucy bitch an immortal daughter of Hecate or something? You have her in every story almost, in any timeline or time period, and she is always just as lively and suspicious...
theprincedonte chapter 62 . 7/14
Stop writing! I just binged all 62 chapters and now have to get up in two hours for work! Lol. Joking aside this is a marvelous story and though some aspects of it don't click the rest is wonderful. The philosophical debates, religious themes all add up to a fantastic read. I'm a bit biased towards Jake (black flag best game!) but he had some of the best dialogue in the story thus far. As much as I'm looking forward to the rest of it I'm really looking forward to when ALL of Percy's secrets come out ie the demon, reincarnation and especially what Nero did to him. Though the 6th and final life is going to be throughly interesting as it looks like it'll be unique to this tale. Lol, I look forward to the present day repercussions of Zöe kissing Percy.
Johnsmythe2oo2 chapter 62 . 7/9
update...
update atleast once in a while you can't just leave us wanting more to it ...
ManticoreBlues chapter 60 . 7/7
although I would love to see like a version with a less fucked up Percy, still fucked up but like without the rape and some of the mind fuckery,
also regarding this fanfic the one thing I'm worried about is fundemental changes in Percy and then suddenly Percy being nothing like he has been for most of the story. my main fear being a sudden change from honourable faithful assassin/vengeful assassin/Jake swallow and Percy combination and everything that's hardened Percy and his first three life's included but not limited to death of multiple families, killing tons of people, the Nero situation. etc being wiped out in place for insecurity in the face of a life of being a emotionally stunted Templar girl forced to work for the assassin's and everything else and whatever happens in his 5th life. my fear mainly stems from a fear the flash t.v show instilled in me which is literally everyone changing at a drop of the hat Everytime someone time travels and all character development just goes down the shoot in place for unexplained conflict.
don't get me wrong I'm ok if Percy gets a little girl/sassy, girl etc. side and that but my fear is those being too dominant a part of combined lives. if you could respond this at some time between your next upload and the first chapter of "memories received" or reply to my comment id really appreciate it. although considering how well you've blended the other lives so far I don't think I truly have to worry too much. your also an experienced author so even if those parts end up a bit too big for my Personal taste the character will still probably be really good
ManticoreBlues chapter 60 . 7/7
don't know what that guys deal was, I'm enjoying all this philosophy, torture, diaper and gender confusion stuff. but then again I have problems. still this is really good writing and everything connects on some level. really impressive shit if you ask me.
plxn chapter 2 . 7/1
Story is great! Please quickly update!
VINcredable chapter 29 . 6/19
Ok gonna stop reading here, the story was fun to begin with, but it went completely off the rails at chapter 28
Lucifer 666 chapter 1 . 6/16
Will you please hurry up and update this story
Johnsmythe2oo2 chapter 62 . 6/5
its been sometime since you updated this story
this is the best assassins creed and percy Jackson crossover ever written so naturally many of us readers want to more of this story man so please update this story
ArcaneDragonLord chapter 57 . 6/1
Chaos, the omniscient God of PJ fanfics. Love it.
Guest chapter 62 . 5/27
I just bought the Jack the Ripper dlc for syndicate, jack the ripper’s story of a rogue assassin gone mad is interesting, especially when he’s the Frye twins protege. Why not have peter fill that role? It would play into the story and maybe Peter wants a bit of revenge for whatever Jacob and evie did to him? Depends on what your doing with peter’s character for that life... it might work, it might not. -x5t0rmxless P.S. holy cow it’s been awhile and you’ve gone really far! A little sad about Edwards story being fudged by Jake but having a philosopher pirate running around pointing right at the plot holes continuously was a pretty good substitute. I like how you incorporated odyssey despite it not being in your original idea for the story. ( I think odyssey came out 2018 while origins was 2017). Also while Hazel levesque has the same last name as one of arno’s Targets the whole reason nico got her out of the underworld was Bianca’s death and I doubt Jake is going to let Mary die again... so how will you bring Hazel into it? She’s kind of important to the HoO series plot... hmmmmm... maybe Kronos summons a future version of her along with Amunet and Bayak to help fight the demigods, leaving the explanation of time paradox where nico would go to the underworld to make her an ally, then she gets summoned by Kronos, which is the reason nico goes to make her an ally she comes back to (future) present and resumes helping the good guys? Bit of a stretch and I’m sure you’ve got a better way of introducing her character into the story... my brain is weird, I can imagine this scenario happen or that scenario but it requires some sort of higher power or an ability exploit like for example percy’s Control over water, well water is in several liquids including blood, sooo Percy could just kill someone by willing the blood to rip them apart from the inside...morbid thoughts aside, I look forward to see where you take this! -x5t0rmxless
Guest chapter 62 . 5/26
One of Arno dorian’s Targets, Marie levesque, shares the same last name as Hazel levesque in the HoO series, according to the game the levesque’s have been Templar’s since the third crusade. Why not have Hazel be Arno reborn? Raised by a Templar mother driven mad by gaea. With Arno’s Memories slamming into her when she escapes the underworld with Nico (which happens sometime during Nico’s escape from camp half blood, I think it’s either just before the start of the titan war or immediately after) you could make her a different character and have Arno’s memories slam into somebody else but I thought it would kinda fit. And it would be a little awkward.
Crying Freedom chapter 60 . 4/26
The way the author handled the haters never failed to impress me lol
AndellOfficial chapter 29 . 4/14
I didn't read this chapter and it had nothing to do with being turned off with tortured rape etc. it's just did something happens often that had happened before with your stories for me, got boring! I mean I got to where Haylee left for Jashin's son before this happened before, and to be perfectly honest I started losing interest when piper and the personalities showed up. It's like your not willing to have a lull in the story so you always come up keep pushing and pushing and it just makes me wanna skip a paragraph here and there just because there are no ups and downs in events just constant unchanging thrum to the story.
Lord Hadarai Peverall chapter 62 . 4/13
I cannot wait for more
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