An excellent story. Can't wait for the next chapter

There's just been far, far too much time and space wasted on Earth events and it makes the story a chore to slog through, not a joy to read. Can't keep going like this, especially as it's just getting worse.

I like the idea behind this story, but I really, really wish you'd quit wasting time with "here's what's happening on Earth, a place we strongly hope the plot will never bring any of the characters we actually want to see back to again and have no reason to care about."

I love this story. Going to have to reread the whole thing since it's been awhile. Eagerly awaiting the next chapter.

Thank you for continuing your fiction. I've been so curious as to your next steps. Please continue as soon as you can. Hope you and yours are all safe and well.

Best,
P.

Update please

Looking forward to new chapters, I absolutely love this! I hope you're doing well!

Fantasisc loving it

please don't let harry become a Jedi. at least not the traditional one since being a Jedi is being a stupid monk.

A good chapter and it really seems that Harriet is Scorpius' mother and I have a feeling that Walpurga Greengrass is attempting to hide it as she could get into trouble if found out. In a previous chapter you mentioned Theodore Nott having an argument with Astoria and I have a feeling that he knows something too but I'm guessing we'll find out later. Just one more thing, while I'm happy you've been updating this story which is my favorite of all of the stories you've written, I would like to see some updates on your other Harry Potter/ Star Wars crossovers since they haven't had an actual chapter in over a year. I know you may be busy but I do hope to see an update on those stories soon.

Have only just found this story and oh my god it’s blown my mind. Absolutely love it. I’m not the strongest user of English but have noticed a couple of minor grammatical mistakes but so minor and minimal that it was probably a one off rather than anything else. I’m really impressed with your writing style and your imagination and can’t wait to read more

Well I think all these coincidences are all going to come together in quick succession pointing to a family they not only has the means but also the need to cover every loop hole and close every possible source as to the real parentage of Scorpius Malfoy

Good job

Why do I think that Thrawn knew quite well what those three boys are and is thus the reason they were actually called in?
Probably hoping they would know what for sickness it was and how to counter it as well.

It also seems Thrawn is prepping her as one of his more trusted officers.
Could it be that Thrawn is trying to slowely get control of that sector Earth is located in?
Because if it is on the side of the Empire, most closest to his own homeworld, then I thinkhe wants to keep it if the Empire does goes under.

I hope she can introduce Thrawn in fixing battle damage to nearby location that are fine, as one excuse of getting certain modifications done.
The other of replacing all lamps of that batch, when one fails, thus getting a batch to use in other locations.

Also, what about giving the Stormtroopers a obstacle room with variable gravity AND the right light sources, in which the Stormtroopers have to train without their armor, to simulate lack off or heavily damaged armor.
Add holo projectors and they could even alter the decor a bit.

One thing is sure, the crew needs a fourth watch turn, to lower pressure on them.
Lets them perform their jobs better, ironically.

I wonder how Thrawn will like the movie and serie, art books, you know.
I do think Thrawn is behind Neville his parents, though.
If so, he will be starting to pull even more strings, soon.

Will Harry need to start training her body again or not?
I can see her extreme high heel walking skill going down, for one.
Should not need this, yet for some reason...
How high is the change for ponyboots to be fused with balletboots?
I can see Thrawn pulling that one for a evening with some governeur, as part of Harry her dress of the evening, being brought in under cover of not being a imperial officer.

So how long before Thrawn can reallly dig his claws in deep?
I can see him wanting her to be more solid comitted to serve him.
Ironically, if he plays his cards right, in the aftermath of this all, he might very well earn her true trust and loyalty.

One thing is sure, Thrawn is not willing to give up his plaything untill he has claimed it as truely his.
Only then could he let it go forging its own path, without risk of backstabbing.
Mmm, seems a future backstabbing can be avoided, if he plays things right.
Hopefully they can get the plans of the Eidolon class Strike Cruiser and the Tie Defender.

It sounds like things are coming to a head, also go Qui Gon get a better apprentice.