Mutsu is the real hero here, because he's the only one stable enough to help with problems and not cause them.

Yeah, Uzume was pushed too far and I'm not unsympathetic, but she really messed up here.

Really liking your addition of Akitsu here, you're handling the poor girl well.

You know you're dealing with someone you should never, EVER fuck with when he bluntly tells you that he hasn't decided whether your species gets to live or not.

Did a good job with Karasuba here.

Pretty interesting so far, a little too wordy with the concepts from 'his world', which kind of slows things down, but still enjoyable.

I love your fic

it took seven chapters to find out that the protagonist is African. Props to you

Damn that ending, had a feeling something like this would erupt from her but damn. Looks like a little pain went a long way. Looks like its time to be honest with her.

Keep up the hard work.

Love this story and the hunter series and the overall character development of the sekirei. Can't wait for u to get the thousands of follows and favs u deserve so I can say I'm one of the OG

this is another nice chapter thank you for your hard work

Reframe should be refrain.

Like the story so far. Most issues I see are simple spelling mistakes.

Another lovely chapter,keep up the hard work.

This story is phenomenal. I hope very much to see its length more than double; Karasuba and a worthy Ashikabi make for a remarkably interesting pair to read about.

This was an interesting concept I guess, but the first person perspective is just killing me.

Wayyyyyyyyyy too much info dump for an OC as well. You should delete the majority of it.

when you read this story you need tons of patience which I don't have I give up this story. Real action was only between no. 4 and mc rest are thoughts of mc and little from his background when I see any dialogue line I thanks Haven becouse when you read 50 k words of description world around mc you are really sick. time wasted but not rly 2 to 10 my rate.