Reviews for Moving On |
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![]() ![]() You are truly incredible. Every line of this was poeric and beautifully written. I could feel the characters. I was the characters... Don't ever stop your writing... Every line is just written so... Jake and Penny are larger than life here. And CERTAINLY larger than they are on the show NOW. Here's to the happy ending we all know they truly deserve! |
![]() ![]() yiippe! that was wonderful and sweet. |
![]() ![]() excellent, loved all the chapters. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh that's awesome Hippie:P I really liked it! It was getting kinda sad there, and I was like 'Damnit! Why can't you just kiss and make up!' Lol. But I understand where Penny's coming from. I love how you show that she's trying to be so strong. It was really really really good! ~Asen |
![]() ![]() ![]() THIS IS GREAT! A little short though. I HOPE YOU WRITE A SEQUEL! THANX SO MUCH 4 WRITING THIS FIC! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is a really good GMM fic! The beginning was a lil' OOC, but the ending made me smile. It's so sweet! Good job! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow! this is so good, i know i've just read chapter one cause i have like no time on my hands but seriously, i really really like it! I hope i can get to chapter seven before you update! YOU'RE AN ANGEL FOR WRITING SUCH A GOOD FIC, THNX! |
![]() ![]() Absolutely wonderful. The emotions were so real that I could almost feel the pain coming from the story. Your characters were very believable. I can't wait for more of your stories. |
![]() ![]() I loved it! I totally loved it! It was so good! I started crying it was so good! (sorry, I'm a hopeless romanic.) Write more fanfiction. Especially Penny/Jake ones! Keep up the wonderful writing! |
![]() ![]() Oh my God! I loved all 5 chapters! let Penny and jake be together though. Thanks. |
![]() ![]() ![]() was write more |
![]() ![]() Hey~ I'm glad finally put up a spot for GMM! And I'm also glad that this was the first fic i read because it's so good! |
![]() ![]() Omg I love this story I have a ? is that that last one. |
![]() ![]() It' . It didn't make me jump out of my seat, or wait in anticapation, but it was good. I don't know where you want to go with this story, though. If you want it to be romantic/comedy, more romance. If you want it to be just comedy and a little romance, put more comedy in it. |
![]() ![]() yea, I can't wait for the final three chapters. Thanks for writing! |