Nice chapter

Nice chapter

Nice job

great to see another update! and back to Nile. love your description of the saber fight, and I think it sounds accurate.

jack seems seems good, actually. Maybe more than 50 50. I wonder if it's the previous character that determines their alignment?

Great to see another update! I like the Force blowing up of the ships.

suddenly i am worried for the Bastila-Revan... foreeshadowing? great to see more uodates on this!

Wow this is a really interesting concept. Im definitely looking forward to see where youre taking this

This is a really cool story concept and I really like your execution of it. Hope you keep updating!

It's very cool they don't all have the same motovation. like the addition of Marin to the mix. Shalli wants to kill Malak... Marin to join him! wonder if she'll end up being his companion?

It's really a genius premise. Enjoying the update, and I went back and re-read some of the earlier chapters. Shalli and Atton seem like they could cause a lot of interesting damage to the galaxy. So many ways to take this! Will Nile be the hero who stops the others? Saves them? Is corrupted by them?

ooo, Carth has a Revan too? I like the way you had Revan confront his identities here too.

it's a really interesting premise, and one pretty close to my own heart, lol. Why did the Jedi let the rejected ones live? Apologies if I missed that somewhere in the narrative.

there's a cool balance here between humor and serious that I am digging. Really original premise as well!

Hmm. I don't think I've run across anything quite like this. Very refreshing to read. Honestly well written. I'm looking forward to reading the rest of this. Good luck!