I CRIED THIS WAS SO GOOD LEIK I CAN'T

I don't think it needs a sequel, I think it's AMAZING. I didn't think I'd read the whole thing but I did. Impressive. I think Emiko was fine, and sounded like a normally worried mother, it doesn't matter that she naturally hates Satoshi anyways. I think that Dark, especially when he was panicking, was perfect, I think he'd actually be like that. Good job!

sequel!

really awesome story!

Oooh. I humbly request a sequel. :3 I loved your style in this. I liked how you wrote Emiko, actually, as well as Dark. Kudos on a great fic!

~Kyuuketsuki_Nekko

Wow, that written really well! I loved how Satoshi didn't want anyone to see him vulnerable.

I liked this story. It was very heart-felt. Please make another! Or continuing would be good! Thanx

this is great keep up the great work

That was awesome XD I got frightened when Krad came out, I thought he was going to hurt Daisuke. And poor Satoshi *huggles Satoshi*

well the ending was a lil sad but i think how daisuke helped Hiwatori out was nice of him, good job.

please make a sequel bu u probably arent reading this but if u r please please please make sequel

please, please make a sequal!1 i really loved it!

bad ending

ending sucked

rewrite!

NOW!

make it happy or atleast write a awesome sequel!

JA Ne

Aw, poor Satoshi-kun. I kinda like the way Dark was, it's not like he'd be serious or anything in such an interesting situation. I don't think it matters if everyone is perfectly in-character, its a story, and its YOUR story, so have the characters say whatever you want them to say. If we wanted perfect in-character-ness, we'd go read the manga, right? Not fanfiction! .

I like the writing style of this, there's details and quality in it. Great job. A sequel would be cool, especialy if Krad's more involved in it, because he's awesome! Keep it up!

~Sapphire

I loved it. It was very good. I didnt understand the ending but it was all good.