Wonderful story. Thank you for sharing it.

What a wonderful story! Thankyou!

I loved this story and would love an update.

Love this ff. Seqeal please

Wonderful ending to an amazing story excellent writing fantastic work

Thanks that was great.

So Eli forgot about his family and made a whole new family. Good job Fitz.

Well am disappointed u ended dis so rapidly witout even a warnin
I guess its better to end it prematurely dan abandonin it rite?*sighs*

I hope Fitz's mother has learned her lesson.

Aww no I'm so sad I love this story but I'm glad you ended it this way it was perfect but I do hope you come back to it

Beautiful family, doesn't make sense I ask about Fitz's mom now that's the story is completed. Thanks for sharing with us.

Very good story, great ending. You developed it well and i will look forward to enjoying many more.

Thank you for writing this wonderful story. Loved it

Sorry to see this story come to an end but I understand. Would have loved to read something about Huck and the others coming for a visit and a resolution, good or bad, with Fitz's mom.

This was great story like all the rest of your work. You know I'm always anxious to read whatever you write. So far you've gone to Chile, Sweden, Paris, Russia, New York, Lake Tahoe and D.C. Where to next? :-)

Have enough steam for Lady of the Lake?

Awww, does it have to end? You can still explore the drama with the mama, and we can get a look at the boys growing up, maybe Olivia's dad asking for forgiveness? Either way, I have really enjoyed reading this story! I look forward to seeing what you come up with next :-)