Reviews for Ripples in the Sea: Shark Tales
Karina June chapter 6 . 10/7/2019
Love this story. Wish you would continue it as I would love to read more. Thanks.
anonybiscuit chapter 6 . 10/29/2018
I love this! Time travel! Squalo expressing/explaining his grumpy 30-odd-year-old-ness as being a cloud and using that to get away with shit! Training with family! Really looking to see where this goes if you decide to continue it
00Chup chapter 6 . 9/8/2018
This story is awesome, very well thought out. I'm excited to see what happens next!
Catlyn chapter 6 . 7/5/2018
Please update. :) This story seems too be too good to keep hanging please.
Guest chapter 6 . 6/2/2018
Though I understand him not wanting to persue the Cello in school, I still hope he plays it sometimes as a hobby and for his sister. He could use a hobby to relax, now that he's in the past, and being 12 causes him stress
Ste.Citta chapter 1 . 5/8/2018
...actually, there are no tools in motorways in Sicily...
Adel Mortescryche chapter 6 . 5/1/2018
Okay, to start with, aaaaaah I love the flame theory in these early paragraph! It makes so much sense that earlier techniques would get lost because they hadn't been saved/archived properly and then got lost because the people that knew them died. And the voice trick not working if people can't hear it does make sense. They'd just get hit with the flames, not the command.

Squalo the Cloud. [snickers] That said, homework problems! Poor bby!shark.

I'm with Squalo, though. It's maddening to go back to being dependent on other people for the things that matter, though. It's like an itch under the skin that you can't quite get at to scratch.

Omg the entire bit about Squalo needing to talk to his classmates for groundwork, and his classmates being scandalized because of what he's wearing. School was a special kind of hell, wasn't it. [laughs] I mean, I'm imagining 33 year old Squalo sitting at a desk and being thoroughly exasperated, here. And the *pettiness*. [continues to laugh]

All the Superbi family headcanoning/building is *fascinating*. I'm guessing there's more on it in Black Sky? I remember you mentioning that before.

...Miss Deodata is adorable. So is Squalo's bemused reaction to her.

Ossifraga is fantastic! Very Superbi, if you've made the long suffering and the sharp mind behind it familial traits.

I'm just laughing at all the warnings about murder on the school premises. Ah, Mafia school. There's a series out there about a normal guy finding himself in a monster school and now I can't help but wonder what would happen if Iemitsu had tried to shunt Tsuna into mafia school in early canon...

Anyway, this was a fun chapter! I can see lots of groundwork happening for later plotting. Those texts Ossifraga mentions might help Squalo jump a grade or so, right. Which leaves less time for planning, but it'll also mean he'll be out of school faster!

Shark Tales and Shark make me happy, okay. Talk about Time Travel with the protagonist suffering from the side effects of being a kid again. If we can call school and familial interference 'side effects'. [snickers]
Umei no Mai chapter 6 . 5/1/2018
Squalo's adventures in the past continue! However I rather doubt this was what that teacher expected to happen upon sending Squalo to the head teacher.
OperaEagle IcelynLacelett chapter 5 . 8/26/2017
...Dang it, I really like that Compliance theory. It works really well. Is it okay if I add that to my headcanon and Flame Theory doc, which I might publish at some point? And do you have any more alternate properties?
Hmm, so different resolves and focuses bring out different Flames. That's interesting. I could kind of see that but not really? Enough to not have a problem with it in this fic but I won't be headcanoning it any time soon.
Anyway, nice piece of work here, hope you continue soon!
And while yes, they could use someone better as Decimo, I woul like them to not forget Tsuna all the way. His life was miserable before Reborn showed up.
Guest chapter 5 . 8/12/2017
I really really loved this. I can't wait to see where it's going; so many possibilities, changes and consequences Squalo can affect!
(The thought of people's reaction to Xanxus nonchalantly making Squalo his RAIN guardian is hilarious XD As is Xanxus' reaction to Squalo "clearly" being a Cloud.)
Thank you!
Untrust Us chapter 5 . 6/27/2017
Of course the Superbi didn't use any silly metaphorical names for flames and just called it what it looked like and what it did.

I think Squalo will now get an image of his grandfathers disgusted face in his mind whenever something Stupid regarding flame conventions is brought up.

I really like the bit about Emotions and flames. It bring out another dimension of quirks for those who are active. I imagine that if you get used to using your flame in a specific way you could subconsciously get used to using the associated emotion as well. Which further explains the way a 'personality' can get connected to a flame-type and cause even more assumptions.

Subtext is always relevant and important. Historical subtext is however annoyingly hard to puzzle out from only getting fragmented pieces. It easy to forget that there were actual people involved when you read about events in books.

Squalo now has a new way of conquering the dreaded paperwork. Burn it.

If Squalo gets the voice thing explained then he could mabye bring the terror of the Voi to new levels.

Thanks for the chapter!
Shadowblayze chapter 5 . 6/23/2017
Delfino and Grandma are *team goals*!

Also, lovely and interesting in-depth explanations!
OBSERVER01 chapter 5 . 6/23/2017
Squalos learning!
MrsRegulusBlack123 chapter 5 . 6/19/2017
Hmm, well that was interesting. I wonder how all this information about Flames is going to affect the future?

Thanks for the update! :)
anon chapter 5 . 6/18/2017
I love straight man squalo. He doesn't sugar coat things and tells it as it is. Rainbow mafia men fighting with jewellery:)
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