You just repeated the same chapter.

MORE GIVE ME MORE!

I am not reading this story but the girl or whoever that is, who commented before me I will say fuck off bitch if you don't like jaune stories don't come there and comment there whore.

As much as I love RWBY, Jaune will always be my most hated character. It doesn't matter if it's in show or in fanfiction, something about him just completely turns me away from him. I like the story but I can't read a Jaune centric story.

I'm loving this

Awesome story. Can see this becoming more popular

I'm loving this story please update soon

Love the story, and the direction that you're taking with this. The only concern I have is how you're going to use Esdeath. Well, I hope you update this story soon. I always love a badass Jaune with some other universe's power, and your story is one of the better ones.

love it

Ok, we don't know much about Jaune's family but what we do know is that his father was a great hero, so why the hell do most people write him down like a tyrant.

Ok, why can his sisters treat him like crap and get away with it but when his father does anything remotely mean he has to be punished.

I'm sorry but having Jaune scared of Weiss of all people is stupid and if you do it again I'm going to stop reading. I mean she's a bitch. in fact, don't have Jaune scared of anything he's part dragon now for fuck sake, also don't make this just like an anime making something anime when the show itself is not, is just dumb and weird.

love it

Thanks for putting in the time and effort to write this new chapter I quite enjoyed it!

Oh no. A yandere is on the way. THat's just great.

Here's hoping Jaune can at least convert her to his side...or kill her fast before she ruins things. Guess we'll see.

Overall, quite an excellent chapter! Keep up the good work!