Reviews for The Equestrian Maelstrom
amal0197 chapter 11 . 7/8
so you like undertale eh?
amal0197 chapter 1 . 7/8
ah,i see you watch sao as well.
robert krause chapter 4 . 6/21
why i ask is why now do a war when the sun and moon it war with each other ,when twight is queen of her own lands name is cloves fire , she is ruler of it , with Naruto is king and gen too, spike is co gen , and rain bow dash is marring to him too , and she head of her flying side show team , killer joys , rack is gen 5 stars ,as for others who living in the new lands is others lost homes and family too , like CMC is odd ones too , apple boom is out law and living on the run now , muslces and black hat like her sister old hat now , when Naruto JR is a out law as well his a black fox a mix of his dad looking and twilight hire , a black hat too, wings no his back , sir i Robert Krause am sorry if you i was samp you sir i was not doing it sir
robert krause chapter 2 . 6/21
when Naruto had get the need lands he buy out and when his home was fin in it had 2 to 6 bed rooms and bath room too, when Naruto had a 9 bed room a men cave den office when he had keeping army stuff and his guard schools year books and old team pics too when he had seeing to it to keep one of twight spike both sinning and his gril and Naruto when it the base , when he keep old army racks in a glass case on the wall now , when he had made a room in the back yard he had the fox s teams living in old house made out boxes and he had working it the town base now , when it the cub office Naruto keep , used his now is looking for a bar to had tea in seeing the others long times guards and he put on the wall now one his took over for star nights a bat pony LT who had kill off , and some one too he had like cop will ford , when Naruto get took away by some guys he had took out ,one was little and his own cuie marck is a paly card the ace and king of d , when the others was odd too , even a big size wing pony like rainbow dash , name was odd too , when the others Naruto took out was too good and the big and Naruto get into it , when the war was like took down rain bow dash , when then the big pony is kill off , Naruto had took off the wings and gold it now , when then the head is off too, Naruto had used a sword skills on him too , when the hair now on his old vest now, when the cuie marcks all of them are on the vest now , when looking them up the guys had working in the past when king sormba took over and swords was old too, when the others he seeing was not form here , when the big wing pony had get here years too, when money was too big for them and a map too when seeing he had ask for other bed room away form them princess celestia and Naruto had not seeing who pay for it , when keep the money now , he save up and used it to buy out some land now, PS sir this not to spam you it is to help out showing a way of Naruto used his warrior skills and powers to get out of hot stuff and a bar when pics of kill off warriors is pat into it ,you to seeing NICS when GIBBS had be a pic of a kill off cop on the wall ,
robert krause chapter 19 . 6/12
sir on this fan fiction i Robert Krause was like to seeing a ninjas vs Naruto and his little team to go war with when Naruto had took down ninjas teams and he hand his dad a scroll saying to let his let his son life his life and he is to made his own clan in Equestrian for good , for all the pain and let the vaillge to do to him for a long time , 2 the lands of the whirlpool is off lams form them for good , it is his , when then his dad get it now , his read it and now he seeing why kind of son he made life in for his sisters , when then if it not to made with his boss the fire lord well get it , i well let Naruto get the mob money and used it to made some new stuff like his wife and him and spike and a son name Naruto JR who a fox/hybire pony like the boy had his mom powers and his son muslces and hulk like body , Naruto had marring rainbow dash as his doing to twight , when with rainbow dash ,she and Naruto get 3 kids one boy name ash wind fire his had rain bow dash wings and red hire like Naruto , body like flying pony , but reading is not good for him , his little sister Roberta is more black blue and white , and 3 son jet fire is bit of little and wings too his green and red , when then apple jack she is Naruto wife too , when then she and Naruto had one kid a dauther name Sammy no go a bit of fire cracker and she is hulk and big mucles and she had grey and red eyes , she is a fighter like her dad , and her cowboy hat black , as for furry , she and Naruto had not be marring she marring a wonder bot , one time she and him be with each other Naruto tell to be good for him or him and Naruto well get into it , for Naruto and her sill good ,when rally is sill in the army ,
HyperA2019 chapter 3 . 5/13
I am looking foward to Chapter 19.
robert krause chapter 3 . 5/9
sir this was not spam you so do not took this as one , when Naruto had a bad feeling when the grils had going to stop the evil king sobmar and his evil men , Naruto and spike had find a sea cave and when it was for sale Naruto had buy out and when made into a home for when Naruto keeping put into a house he get form the top and moving it to the cave and made into a house for him spike and twight and others to living when Naruto name it no name , when he and twight had living for when the 2 had bad news on his former ninjas vaillge was came to find him ,when twight with a kid on the way move her to it ,and spike too , he had others it too, when then a war was on now , when Naruto put down cells 7 89 10 and when then his so god father get his ass be put down too, and the 2 twin sisters too get put down he men it feeling good to put you 2 down , Naruto you big ass , when then if you well call me it , i can call you it now , when Naruto had call out fox fire and his body be to a fox body now all muslces and super big too , he had his god father a note to his dad to let him living his own life here in Equestrian as the 1 clan of his own or the lord of fire well kown of his ninja vaillge bad stuff or his to be out of his job for it , he get his ninjas back too, when going into his dad former stunde bag and get out his dad dagger now.
robert krause chapter 4 . 5/4
when Naruto had made his house in the back when he get the land he was workings on some lords home with stuff out of a army bag and track too Naruto had art form old forts and bases he had workings it before MP barter and as too, when get the money to living no and art he get was grils with big muscles and super size bobs and muslces too, he find them in the back in some old locker too, he took with him 200-209 when find keys to it now , full of cothers and co play stuff like DR Who stuff like the DR past life s form the 4 to5 and 9 and 10 old ones Naruto keep and 4 hat old hats and when get to were them too, and star wars stuff too, both good and evil ones , when old pics too , form tom barking and others Naruto had keep , sir this not spam you but a way of a sf nerd keeps stuff out of old TV shows like DR who and star wars and others too, Robert Krause PS if you think of gust his not me for it was me who be doing it but it is not me spam you sir sorry for it .
robert krause chapter 13 . 4/20
hay one form Robert Krause , Trixie 12 sunset shimmer 11 running met ,twight 12 ,rainbow dash 11 running met , apple jack 9 , the bat grils twin sisters 2 ,
robert krause chapter 12 . 3/9
sir this form Naruto fan Robert Krause it is not samping , when Minato had sit it his desk on it was 4 pics one was his 1 team with Jiraiya and his 2 is his own team and then others of his 3 kids and wife and when others be good times like the grils own bath day pary not one of Naruto in it , when others was when both grils own ninjas team 7 8 , when then the team be to Equestria like fools each had sit in the office of it ruler , pics be made to , when Naruto had get wind about it he call his fox s grils and a war was on , all of them get took out , i Naruto cap of pony , had not like you fools used the office of both c,and luna as a pic thing to paly with so you be lock up , when he sand a note to his dad to let kown his to came here now if you can get you ninjas out of here now, and here one of my own think of to let me living here now, in Equestria now and for good to , or the fire lord is to well get some bad stuff is going on in his ninjas vaillge and Minato well seeing his job well go to a more powerful Hokage and his to took out ,
robert krause chapter 7 . 2/29
sir my is Robert Krause i was trying to help out with Naruto i am sorry if i was doing the Naruto and twight stuff for you sir , as for my picks twight apple jack rainbow dash and Trixie , as for spike apple boom and INX ,
robert krause chapter 4 . 2/23
sir this is form Robert Krause ,why not let Naruto doing some co playing on the side like DR who when his in to DR Who old stuff like the 4 DR who old stuff like a red jacket and long red staf he had and a hat too , then the 5 DR who and 10 too, when doing some star fox too, black one now , when meeting Danny p, Naruto had the time lord time ship , was be Danny p bouny huther /spy /hacker / warrior . were keeping a were house in the lost part of Danny vaillge Naruto keeping others time ships out DR who , and odd stuff too, like art on the wall of foes he took out like the egg fox ,his 1 foe and others too, he took out ,
robert krause chapter 4 . 1/15
when Naruto 1 get to living in pony town he 1 meting up with apple jack when her no good boy poky had sex with some other gril Naruto took him out and tell him to hit the road boy and took his gril too, when doing it Naruto and apple jack be lovers and the 2 keep out of others not to find out , as with it now , now she is his lover now,
robert krause chapter 2 . 12/30/2019
sir why not let Naruto do house with a tools shled in the back when he keeps a old used fly ship he get form the navy ware house and working on for used when he and twight spike get to flying about , like NCIS Gibbs had doing with , when in the house is 12 bed rooms and 4 bath rooms , a cub size office he keeps his army stuff on the wall and old racks too and a sword he get form the navy shop , when is the Lub he used to made his tame in ,
robert krause chapter 19 . 12/21/2019
sir why not do it when Naruto made his ex ninjas of the vaillge he was form as pow and Naruto had used the pony s sisters old home as a Jell cells and he took the 4 own dagger form the dog used own bag and saying to you not keep it no more mother fuck , when the 2 sisters of his saw it both get mad about gave back boy he gave them a mad dead pan look ,i am talking to you 2 little grils ,no then quite you 2 when rainbow dash had seeing them now you 2 sisters yes rainbow dash but do nor feeling sorry for them 2 ,why ,this 2 are my mom and dad little grils who are so bad , 2 is i well like to having words with my fool god father now , gave my dad a note saying i well like to living here if you do not mind and 2 is i well like to having my own clan of my own here too his came here to seeing men here for his own ninjas and his 2 kids too , if not it is going to his boss the fire lord , now going to it now , sir this not samping you sir but i was trying to gave a note on his dad and mom and others ninjas be pow s and Naruto own think of took the dagger form the dog used sir . fire lord is the boss of the ninjas vaillge and lands them rule in too, Robert krause
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