| Reviews for Coiled |
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danyktisera chapter 42 . 8/5/2019 We are desperate for more *cries* |
Shadow Spirit Dragon-Wolf chapter 42 . 6/30/2019 Naruto and Oro just can't keep off each other clearly. They're so bad about that kind of thing haha. And of course, Sakura knows and is very upset, but is also there to help the little baby so she gets to the business of that and trying to help him out. Naruto is far more freaked out about the shot than the little baby is, hapa, of course, he is. I know these reviews weren't the best, but I tried my best on them. |
Shadow Spirit Dragon-Wolf chapter 41 . 6/30/2019 Aww! And the baby is born! Though of course there are complications. I rarely see stories with "hybrids" where they actually have complications due to their odd existence. you often see them be perfectly fine, and I suppose in a world where they are normal they would have adapted that way, but for someone like the baby it's hard to really be normal since it's literally different than anything anyone has seen before, and literally, a baby and snake fused together at the hip in a sense. It's going to come with some complications and while some things have been done to try and help he certainly is going to have a lot of struggle and training to be as "normal" as possible. It's kind of fun to "make" a "disability" in a way, it's like my story, but we don't' need to get into that. |
Shadow Spirit Dragon-Wolf chapter 40 . 6/30/2019 And here comes the little baby. It's so cute and sweet how people gather to help, and of course, things get a bit complicated because it's an egg and all of that. But Sakura can do it. It's going to be interesting to see what goes on from here, and of course next chapter we see the little baby. |
Shadow Spirit Dragon-Wolf chapter 39 . 6/30/2019 Aww! The baby shower is so cute! What with all the presents and all the people gathering together and all their kids as well. It's such a nice chapter and I just think it's really great. I love how they all interest, but still kind of have their own groups. Plus all the presents are so nice and fit everyone. I think it really works, and the kid is going to be really spoiled by all these gifts :D. |
Shadow Spirit Dragon-Wolf chapter 38 . 6/30/2019 Karin and Suigetsu is such an interesting relationship, but I can really see it happening. They're such an interesting pair. While they're not my favourite characters (and Jugo is certainly my favourite of Sasuke's group) I do like them enough to want them happy. Plus them deciding to make Oto a real village is a nice and interesting thing. While some people complain about how Oro become more than just someone who wanted chaos, I find the idea interesting with why he created his village, and in a way, I think that they really could make it what it maybe should have been to start. Kabuto and Shizune talking and bonding was interesting as well. It's nice to see them figuring things out together. As I said before it's nice to see everyone getting along and working as a team to try and figure this out and help as best they can. |
Shadow Spirit Dragon-Wolf chapter 37 . 6/30/2019 Okay, finally getting to reviewing these chapters. You should be lucky I didn't just say screw it and just review the last chapter you have posted up because I could have easily done that. Anyway, to the actual review. I love Oro getting to meet Gaara's baby. It's super cute and such a sweet moment. Plus he gets to look forward to his baby of course. I'm really excited about the said baby coming because I know how cute he actually is. Also, he really is well informed. Oro and Hinata bonding is also really sweet. It would be Hinata who doesn't care if Naruto loves her as long as he's happy and they can still be close friends. She's so good and I love her so much. Still, it's really interesting to see how the stuff goes with her and Oro and just the way they are with each other. It's super great. It's nice to see that everyone is rather open-minded about the whole thing which of course is in part thanks to Naruto and how he changes things, but it's super great! I know you're not into this right now, but you really do good. |
Andreina Cummings chapter 42 . 6/25/2019 Awesome story please continue writing it |
Shadow Spirit Dragon-Wolf chapter 36 . 3/20/2019 That was so cute. the cute little snake wanting to help, but having trouble explaining what happened was really cute and funny actually. I really enjoyed how it just loves Jugo so much, and everyone is trying to help figure things out. It really shows how times have changed since the main series of the anime. Then the stuff with Guy and Kakashi is great. Though it's not my first ship for them, I actually do see it as a very sailable ship for sure. Maybe my third for Kakashi, possibly fourth, but it kind of depends on my mood to be fair and the situation I'm considering because we all know my AA ships change depending on what part we're at. Also, apparently we got through the third game fast if this was published during 2-4 or I was just really slow about commenting, but now I'm just rambling. It was a great chapter and the next one promises to be really cute. I do miss our stories, but not in the mood at the current moment because AA, whoopsQ! |
MightBeInsane chapter 33 . 1/28/2019 this is actually my second time reading because you had stopped updating for a while so when I saw you had new updates I just had to reread it. but whith that being said great fucking story man |
Shadow Spirit Dragon-Wolf chapter 35 . 11/3/2018 Aww! Family time with the Nara (and Mirai) and a visit from Uncle Gaara :D still a very cute scene and then some serious moments too. A good mix. It’s nice to see what the others are up to. Also, a cute reunion between teacher and student. It’s good to see them get to get over some of the issues of the past. And yay the snakey is back for a bit :D |
Shadow Spirit Dragon-Wolf chapter 34 . 10/8/2018 So much cuteness with Gaara and the family. It's nice to see some of the other characters, and how they can enjoy themselves despite all that's going on, and everyone wants to see Naruto and give him their wishes because everyone loves Naruto of course. It's great to be getting to know some of the others and how they have all been doing. Also, it's going to be nice to see them reconnect with their family who is now in a different village. Cuteness from the little baby is very exciting. Also, Naruto and Orochimaru getting to see what they have to look forward to is always a nice thing as well. It's interesting only having one POV this chapter, but it works and I really enjoyed it. |
Uzumaki spiral chapter 1 . 10/7/2018 If it were a male/female relationship i would read this but gay or the mpreg in the reviews make me sick down to my core |
TigrezzTail chapter 34 . 10/6/2018 Well at least Tenzo isn't using that as an excuse to further his hatred. It was interesting to see Gaara and company if only briefly. |
Kristina chapter 4 . 7/17/2018 Corn is a fruit?! I feel lied to. Curse you elementary for all your falsehoods. Love the story so far though. |