Great chapter!

yes yes yes yes yes yes

Rare updates are better than none.
It's good to see that this story has yet to be abandoned.
It really feels like I'm reading an official piece of warriors literature. Very enjoyable.

This story is amazing! First of all, your writing style is so similar to the Erins, and it flows really well. I love reading stories that have vivid (yet not too vivid!) descriptions. I can imagine the camp so clearly. Tigerclaw is also the perfect arrogant and ambitious character. Some of the scenes that mirror the books but from Tigerclaw's point of view are definitely what he probably was thinking during them. And his perspective definitely affects the narration, I quote "Tigerclaw was licking the bitter tang from his muzzle when Fireheart sauntered into the den." That arrogant kittypet! I know Tigerclaw's supposed to be evil, but I find myself rooting for him all the time. He should definitely try to let the Spottedleaf x Fireheart thing happen, it's so perfect. It would also be excited to see how their relationship works out.
Anyway, this is getting long, so... Great story! I can't wait to see what happens next!

Very pleased to see this update; I can't remember how long it's been. Good chapter. Love how Tigerclaw is interacting with the script of events here. Yellowfang is being entertaining as well.

I wonder how things are going to go between Tigerclaw and Fireheart. And what might happen when they return to the forest - I don't think Tigerclaw will want to return through RiverClan territory.

This is an interesting twist on the WindClan mission, I look forward to seeing if Tigerclaw’s plan to garner favor in WindClan succeeds. This also brings into question Whiteclaw’s death, as I can’t see Tigerclaw taking a shortcut through RiverClan territory like Fireheart and Graystripe did in canon.

I sincerely hope Tigerclaw manages to save Spottedleaf from Clawface, when the time comes. She has a great amount of potential for as an ally of Tigerclaw, and, if that is not possible, a growing relationship between her and Fireheart would most definitely be useful for Tigerclaw to know about.

Keep up the excellent work.

Wow...I love it! :D Please update soon!

Mmmm...Tigerclaw sure seems eager about killing.

cliff-hanger!

OOOOHHHH EVIL. Mwa ha haaaa

Very well writen!

Hello! Will you still be continuing this story?

Please update!

Poor Ravenpaw. I hope if/when he gets his warriors name, it'll be Ravenwing. That's what the Erins said, i think. That his warrior name would have been Ravenwing.

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