Well. It was an alright read.

Character motivations and actions were all over the place.

Plot barely existed and sometimes felt like three or four different stories all together.

You had so many ideas that you probably forgot them mid chapter.

Honestly, you did have some really good gems in this though.

Best chapter so far. Massive jump in quality and motivations.

What a fantastic chapter. This level of writing is what has kept me reading this.

Especially that confrontation with albus

Man, it’s like you’re just spit balling a plot, paragraph by paragraph.

If you had started with hermione who was fighting against Tom and against Harry in some three way war that destroyed the world, it would have been awesome.

So far you’ve got a powerful Harry who likes to play with his targets like a cat.

11ch in and the most interesting thing so far is an evil Time traveling Ron Who says “my lord” every two seconds and daph who’s uncovering the situation.

A fun read. Don't enjoy many Dark Harry stories but I like this one.

just hoping that you'd one day came back, just like YagamiNguyen recently

Still an amazing story, hope you continue it

This story is bloody brilliant, I hope that someday you regain your muse and do continue your story. Anyway extremely good story, and i love Haphne pairing so I already like the story from the start.

Plz come back to this story

I hope harry and Fluer clear their problems. I mean I was hoping amazing romantic love story between Fluer X harry. But you changed entire Fic in later chapters. I like your work. I hope you will consider my opinion. Thank you very much

When is the next update

you really got me hooked up, im really curious how things are going to end up. your work are amazing and i truly hope you’ll continue them

Wonderful story, just marvellous! I loved it so much.. Im really disappointed that its incomplete, i hope u continue this and your other stories some day, also it sucks that u made fleur unlikable in this story but i love your Daphne too much to complain. Just loved it:)

Awesome story Hope you update it

Hope you update soon