Wow alittle to personal, but a good begining.

dude, this story's cute and all but the grammatical errors and stuff are confusing me!

dawg, edit!

There're grammar errors and confused words in the entry, but the story, thought a bit short, is good in all its essence. I loved it nonetheless.

this is really good! but you have too continue soon!

y does everyone have such long hair? _

nice story update soon

nice story update soon

What an awesome fan fiction! Please continue your fan fiction. Oh! I just think Umi and Clef are adorable together! Make it a good one next time, and keep up the great work!

0.0 wow...great story...but you havent updated...in a LONG time...*pouts*

UPDATE SOON!

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Umi-chan

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I LOVE IT! -n_n-

so far i find yur story going well. it's so kawaii! _ umi/clef! pls update soon!

aww clef in cute dress clothing *M.* that was so cute! I could just see him dressed like that! Please update soon!

Hey! I really like your idea, and it's coming along really well. I have a quick question though, is Clef in his OAV form? Just curious, and couldn't remember if you mentioned it. Good work so far .

cute! *gigiles* please write more, i love mage clef! thank you

aw i love this story, (wait a sec) let me rephrse that I. LOVE. GURU. CLEF. thank you for writeing such a nice story with him, not many people do. please continue.