You gotta be kidding me.
This dude is too obsessed with Saw for this.

I love it

it should probably be rated higher, the themes are kind of dark. good storyline though

So what does he remember now? So confuse?

Well that was a rollercoaster. We from tragedy, to grief, to confusion. I thought my heart shattered for a second between Jack's sacrifice and the funeral. I wonder what the moon's up to. I'm curious to see where you go with sketchy memory Jack and traumatized Jamie. Great work. You surprised me several times and I look forward to more.

oh goodness what has happened now

so is jack dead forever or will he come back later?

Nobody can kill Jack, he's way too stubborn to die XD

Please tell me that he will remember them eventually! I can't believe that Manny would take his memories again :(

have you ever watched courage the cowardly dog? it was a really good show

anyway that was a really good chapter. Good job with the details and such. hope to see another chapter soon!

SCREAMING damn boi

Nooo Jack. The death scene was so sad but so good!

Really great story!

Ah hah well then. normally a reason for Jack's evil side showing up would be nice but for this I'll let it slide but yeah usually there's a reason. I'm not hating on you tho just saying

This was a suspenseful chapter. Jokul has a talent for picking out bargaining chips. I'm concerned about Jokul's motives even more with the introduction of the knife. Jacks looking pretty backed into a corner. Great work.