why did they slap them? Like what right do they have for that? Nice story by the way

This is perfect. This is GOLD.

Why is this the best not ending ever

Any chance of a continuation?

Oh my god. This is amazing. I love it

somewhere right before the middle of the chapter it says butched instead of butchered
I still love Gilderoy and the gang great chapter

gosh, I loved that race

Just thought of somthing do you think the hat thought lily was a Weasley so just put her in Gryffindor?!

I never got the rules about boys not being able to go up the the girls dorm because theirs no charms to keep girls out the boys dorms

Is Sirius evil in this?

I love your story I’m just so sad that it had to be Luna you know cause she’s one of my faveriot(spell?) characters with her oddity’s and I just feel so sad and upset for her. Plz tell me that she stays alive like Ginny did in the movies and books and they end up bringing Luna in as a honary(spell?)Weasley sister in the end cause I always like the ministry 6 group as freinds along with the Weasley twins

When I click on a Harry Potter fanfiction that doesn't explicitly state otherwise, I expect it to be Harry-centric.
Unfortunately, as I progressed further into the story, the focus on Hermione began to increase.
Although I enjoyed this immensely at times, it no longer satisfies my expectation of what I look for in fanfiction.
Thank you for writing.

gaah! Lol this is a cool fict, Wonder if it'll ever be up-da-ted again

gosh I loved this chapter, I would totally be up for a spinoff of this Lockhart and the team

Umbitch

Personally, I prefer the term ‘plotonium’.

I notice a LotR quote there, very good taste.