Oh my heart! That was so incredibly beautiful and yet heartbreaking at the same time. You channel these characters so flawlessly that I’m in awe of your talent. Thank you!

I agree that there had to be a conversation between them during the ambulance ride and I really like yours, angst and all!

So beautifully angsty! i LOVE IT

Nice story...more background, more angst, more emotion.

I love this! Headcanon accepted!

Love this! You're a talented writer with great instincts and insight! More please!

I loved it. Very compelling

Angsty, but so emotional. This was bittersweet and beautiful. When they were talking in the ambulance, when he started unbuttoning her blouse, I could totally see that happening on the show. Excellent deleted/missing scene from TLD.

I very much enjoyed reading this! Thanks so much for sharing.