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Great story, I can’t wait for the next chapter. Also in the Avatar the last Airbender comic The Search, Zuko found his mom and met his stepfather Ikem/Norem and his half sister Kiyi. So why not have Ikem change his name to Alrich instead and have Kiyi be Sabine’s half sister who was born while she and her family on opposing sides.

Hmm not bad, not bad at all, this is a interesting story thus far and I like your approach thus far to how the Ghost crew traveling with the Gaang though I would like to see more interactions between the members and seeing more exchanges of knowledge, developments, changes, stuff like that as the stuff that the Gaang would be learning and then seeing for themselves in that incident in Concord Dawn would be truly mind blowing for them and Star Wars's deep history would have many lessons and stories for Avatar characters to learn from, much so if you're doing mixes of Canon/Legends such as the Great Sith War, the Mandalorian Wars *There is similarities that can be said with the Fire Nation and the Neo Crusaders I'm sure Sabine would point out* the Jedi Civil War, the Dark Wars, the Great Galactic War, the Cold War, the Galactic War, the War against the Eternal Empire, the Third Galactic War, the New Sith Wars that would cause the Dark Ages, and etc, at least roughly 5,000 years of war and history that is filled with so much that would truly shock the characters and knowing what I can only now imagine with Wan Shi Tong, he's certainly gonna have ton of things to say likely about these said wars and looking at who caused them and why as there can certainly be a lot said about the Jedi/Sith wars and technically further back if you want include events like the Tython Wars or the Force Wars into that matter.

But overall just wouldn't mind seeing more of this kind of interaction with the characters more, much so in regards of the Empire as the Fire Nation I can see is gonna go under lot of new influences now seeing the level of technology the Empire is now showing them, what kind of militarism interactions are happening due to the differences of the Fire Nation's that is besides it's heavy relyness on Benders and Steam Machines, are honestly largely compared to looking at a ancient Chinese Dynasty army besides manner differences and ironic Japanese similarities, it is honestly quite primitive compared to the Empire that is just thousands years ahead of militarism/technology, thus I truly see the Fire Nation is gonna become very eager to gain these kind of advantages once Fire Lord Ozai starts realizing more of what he can do to gain from this alliance and what is now open to him, so it would be interesting to see more of how say Stormtroopers are now adjusting working alongside Fire Nation soldiers, it would make total sense that within reason the Empire would slowly start showing them and giving them blasters or slugthrowers, not enough to make them a threat but still among the influences I can imagine the Fire Nation will gain, would be interesting to see the Fire Nation attempting make their version of slugthrowers/blasters given the fact they made vehicles is a shock that they haven't considered things like projectile weaponry yet but up to you, I imagine you already have big plans set in motion, just only stating some thoughts there as it would truly be something to see Azula becoming very influenced by Imperialistic/Sith aspects as I can only imagine what would a meeting with Sidious will go and what her desire for power will take her given I can imagine Vader will play a role there.

And I really look forward into seeing how you're capture Zuko's character development as he is by far my favorite of the character and he honestly had some of the best development of the show, to now think of what new influences or changes he may go through now with Star Wars factors there I truly look forward into seeing, kinda wished there was more interactions with him and Kallus and what things Zuko was learning about the Empire and Galactic History that may add new things to him? But still liked what you did and I can imagine there'll be more coming. Funny enough if you were to think about it, Zuko and Boba Fett are honestly very similar to each other, both growing rough pasts, both have been betrayed, both have a rugged sense of honor and justice, the only difference sadly in Boba's case he didn't had anyone there where Zuko had Iroh, Boba was alone, he was betrayed and lied too countless times, he was distant from the Mandalorians despite the respect still there, and of course the story of what happened to Boba's wife and daughter is just gut wencing but overall a meeting between Boba Fett and Zuko I think would truly be something but up to you, was only noting now thinking to the similarities there and I gotta admit, the thought of Zuko maybe getting his own set of Mandalorian armor *Beskar'gam* or gaining bounty hunter influences is quite the awesome thought XD

Anyway I will say though I did note few grammar stuff but nothing seriously bad or etc since I've certainly done worse myself Just that I sometimes found the scene changes a little confusing to follow, when showing into a different location maybe have the location said in bold set in the center to help show the location has changed? And when showing thoughts, ltalic the words to help make it standout more from normal conversation, and I noticed you've had lightsabers spelled as 'lightsabre', no harm done I'm just little confused why were the other lightsabers listed as that but again no harm done, just felt that needed to be pointed out. And don't be afraid to showcase more of level of power the Empire has as the Siege of the Northern Water Tribes while great, the Empire I felt were too weak there and I can't imagine Admiral Konstantine was all that happy to follow orders from Zhao whom I can imagine he'll try to put the blame on and Star Destroyers are very powerful and they capable of creating craters with their firepower, so it did felt like there should've been more damage done by the Empire or how their forces engaged the Waterbenders but overall I mean no offensive and I apologize if I'm sounding negative or so, just only felt that should maybe be shown more on that.

Must say really did not expected Ursa's case here but quite interesting to say the least XD I must say I am very largely curious of just how exactly has this Portal been going between the galaxies and just how much visits have there been now looking from Jessie's appearance and that of Bossk's, Ursa's though I quite wonder how exactly she ended up going from being the Fire Lord's wife to than becoming apart of the violent/supremacists like the Death Watch or even becoming a member of a legendary Mandalorian clan like Wren but I look forward to it's possibilities exploring one of my favorite aspects of the Mandalorian culture, adoption, Mandalorians are famous for adopting orphans regardless of their gender, birth, race, or even if they're the enemy as children are very sacred in Mandalorian culture and harming or worse is extremely dishonorable in their eyes and a quick way to piss them off, hence they would consider Ozai what they call 'Demagolka' for what he did to Zuko, and I'm thus curious how has Ursa adapted into Mandalorian culture and society and given the most important thing to a Mandalorian is family, how much of her thoughts has kept drifting back to Zuko and Azula? All in all the fact Sabine and Tristen is their half siblings I can imagine will be quite interesting to explore.

All in all, a very promising story and I look forward into seeing where you're take all this, the fact Abeloth is in this story I can truly imagine what kind of horror that 'thing' is gonna bring, wish you all the best of luck to your efforts and things on your end. If you were interested, I got links to videos below I thought might provide some thoughts and ideas, unfortunately I had to separate some of letters in order to have it appear so you're have to place it together and the * will be there just to protect the last detail so delete those when putting the link together. But otherwise hope they help or etc, we can talk on PM if you like to discuss said ideas? Anyway good luck, till next time.
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Mandalorian Documentary 24,000 Years of Honor

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Why Imperial Scout Troopers Were Kinda A-Holes
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The Forgotten Deep Clone Wars-Mandalorian Connection

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The Slave Army of the Republic - The Brutal Life of Clones

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How Did the Republic Protect Itself Before the Clones?

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Good character

Yay The pandemic is definitely an inspiration this chapter.

I am like the ghost comets to the resistance.

I didn’t expect the end. However, it does make things a lot more interesting, as Maul now is kind of in control of the dai li and the city. This is especially interesting when you consider Maul is now someone who could stand in Azula’s way in taking over the Dai li.

Next time a swop and everyone gets visions.

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I have a pretty good idea who long feng's master is, but i'm not going to say to avoid spoilers. Can you put in that when long feng is put in the cell, his master will send an assassin to kill him before he can reveal to the heroes who he was working for if it's not the fire nation and empire? That would make more dark and mysterious.

Dude... that... was... AWESOME!

Seriously, I was hoping this chapter would be AWESOME!

First off, I love how you had Kanan and Ezra assist Sokka with the whole fake Disease Pandemic, it's totally fitting for them~

And Sabine using her Jetpack to fly over the wall instead of using the sewers was a nice touch.

I also love how Ezra went with Aang to find Bumi, as it's something I can see him tagging along with.

Not to mention how Ezra and Aang bonded over the parent figures in their lives, like how Aang had Monk Gyatso, and Ezra has Kanan and Hera. I really like to see them hang out more, and maybe battle with each other more too.

I also love how awesome it was to see Kallus work with Azula, along with his perspective on meeting Azula's friends, and how she gets them to help her... because you KNOW, even he would find her methods of manipulating them to be... questionable.

And let me just say... I LOVE MAI AND TY LEE! Those two are AWESOME! I love Mai fighting with Sabine in hand to hand combat, and even knocking her down a few times, and I like seeing Ty Lee develop a crush on Kallus.

... Though, if I'm being honest... full cards on the table, I was kind of hoping for a Ty Lee and Ezra interaction, with Ty Lee developing a crush on Ezra to be honest... cause I think that would have been cute.

Not saying that I don't like him with say... Sabine... but it's just that I haven't seen much Ezrabine shipping moments in the story, so I don't know if you plan on adding it in, or leaving it out... but either way, if you don't plan on setup a relationship between Ezra and Sabine here... then I kind of hope you have Ezra interact with either Ty Lee or someone else from the Avatar universe... Toph maybe... (That was is just a suggestion, and you don't have to take it seriously... not completely any.)

All-in-all, great chapter man, can't wait to see how the rest of the story goes, and I hope the next chapter comes out soon.

P.S. I hope that the pandemic hasn't hit you too hard so you CAN make the next chapter soon.

I also can't wait to see how that little sup-plot with Zuko and Sabine Sharing the same mom will work, as I am VERY interested in it. Not to mention I can't wait to see what that means for Sabine, Zuko and even Azula! And if that means Sabine will have any latent Firebending abilities... it be interesting to see that happen... along with the idea of Zuko teaching her, along side Aang~

And as always, update soon.

Next stop, The Swamp. Kanan would talk to Sokka about plants after Sokka was regardless of Aang’s concerns about the swamp while swinging his machete

Great Update!

It’s understandable with the whole virus thing, you didn’t want to seem insensitive.

Again we keep getting new players, and some are worse than others. And I was kinda hoping we see Darth Vader in this one.

Also if I was in this series during that whole fake disease thing unlike either Empire or Fire Nation I’d wear a hazard suit and search for a cure. I mean sure this is based off a different century but still.

No offense but the whole Ursa wren thing is kind of confusing cause how would Sabine be older than Zuko and Azula. It’s a great twist I think just wish you could explain it a little more

WOW!... Wow dude... this was COOL!

First off, I love how well you were able to add the Rebels into this episode, a very nice touch with making Rex and Chopper drive the Ghost while the others took the cave.

Though I'm a little sad that we didn't see any kind of Ezra X Sabine shipping in it... I kind felt like it would have been fun to see... though Hera and Kanan was a pretty nice touch.

This chapter was a little slow... but give what it's based off of that's to be expected~

I can't wait to see how the Rebels will handle Azula and her pals Ty Lee and Mai~

(I kind of got me fingers crossed for some interaction between Sabine and Azula... and Ezra with Ty Lee... I kind of feel like there might be some cool rival interactions between all four~)

Anyway, update soon

Keep going I wanna see how Tomtom reacts to the crew of the Ghost