Lol adorable

This is awesome.
Deadpool isn't my favorite character (inappropriate content is the main reason).
But I love seeing him keep in the swears and being his 4th wall breaking, funny self.

somehow sute and sad at the same time, and still seems in character to me. i liked the story

This is awesome!

I'm glad you brought this to my attention.

I can definately see deadpool doing something like this and as it is it humanises the guy who seems to be mostly known for cracking joke and breaking the fouth wall, when not violently killing bad guys.

From what I've read so far in your other work you seem to do a good job of capturing the characters.

A good story and I will continue to check out your work.

Don't know where that came from, but I'm sure glad it happened! Delightful!

aw i think you nailed him! the fourth wall breaking, the witticism, excellent!

OMG...I'M PISSING MYSELF.
Not caring about dimples on her tubthumper.
My goodness sis, I need that

I laughed for a full minute, and then cried when I remembered this wasn't in the movie. It should have been, but I'll have to settle for letting you know how good it was. My favorite part was the almost swears, and the reattachment of the finger. I also like how you've got such a total handle of the character, because this is totally Deadpool.