I hope your dry spell hits a monsoon! ;)
You story is wonderful. Much better than any other twin story I've read! It's intriguing and fun. I like how you are working with the characters. I truly hope your muse returns! Perhaps look under the cushions? You might also find some spare change...

Hello, I recently started reading your stories and its just fantastic. Why don't u continue. It's just brilliant. I hope u begin updating again. Thanx

Great story I love that you the author gave Harry Potter siblings and kept his parents alive a young boy needs his mom and especially his dad as role model.

Hello its been 3 yers, are you planning to continue? Cheerio!

It's almost impressive how you can be this bad at characterization after so many stories.

It's like all of your characters have read the Harry Potter series and is trying to replicate certain things of it.

The problem is, when you build your foundation on such a flawed beginning chapter such as this, the entire thing is going to be rocky no matter what you do. That whole sequence with Voldemort entering their home was just completely nonsense.

Such an awesome story! There are so few well written HP stories where LilyJames are alive! And yours is great! Please continue!

The story had promise. The boys team up to take it to Voldemort.

Snape is now a loose canon. Be curious if Lily would be the one to kill him , especially in sight of Dumbledore.

Really interesting fic. I actually love how Lily James and Sirius completely step away from Dumbledore. The kids are all great as well. Thanks.

Hope you will continue this story now you have finished your others love your writing

Dumbledore isn't wise he is a fool. And The Parents will never allow it. My family would destroy that old goat. And what he just did is the most immoral and unethical action he could take and with the supermajority doing what he wanted. was a rest everyone who voted for that bill need to lose their Lordships. And the lands and money tied to it. And I would if I had my way I would walk into the chamber with my Cousins guard and special forces along with a Royal writ. And in that writ, everyone who voted for that bill will be stripped and All laws that Violate English common law which includes their right to chose the type and place of schooling.

Plus Dumbledore as the mastermind behind the latest bill for Families to send their children to a death trap in order to take their rightful seats so as to claim them. And as a result of what you all have done, you are in trouble. Now as for you Dumbledore because of what you have done By Order of the Queen you are no longer the Chief Warlock of the Wizengamont, Supreme Mugwump of the ICW and lastly Headmaster of Hogwarts. and Finally by Order of the Queen You Albus Dumbledore are to be Whipped. A Whipped severely in front of the entire Wizengamont. Then I would ask how do you understand how much you have screwed up by your manipulations and control-freak tendencies. And let me make something clear because of what has been found on at Hogwarts By order of the Queen Hogwarts School is to be shut down indefinitely until the necessary reforms are made before the school is ever allowed to open again. And the Magicals should be forced to learn everything about non-magicals and the world as a whole. And the excuse that Lily gave Just doesn't fly. Because both communities live in the Same country no matter what they think. And considering what has been going on Cousin Elizabeth would no longer tolerate the separation. In fact, she would most likely call them traitors. And bring most of the Wizarding Community up on treason charges. Even though Elizabeth hasn't read the books herself but the grandchildren and Great Grandchildren have. with one being a big fan and telling her everything she has read. And let's just say if she ever got around to reading the books for herself along with any of the fanfictions on top of watching all the Movies. And remembering the Play she had watched back some years ago let's just say if the Wizarding world was real she wouldn't put up with all this bullshit for much longer. I have never met Elizabeth myself self but another member of my family has to represent the American Branch of the Family to discuss the matter without the British British Branch of the Family for which the royal family is distant cousins of ours. And from what I was told of her and her personality and knowledge about how most of the women in the family are which includes myself. Let's just say that we would put up with and tolerate what has been going on for so long. To put things in simple terms we wouldn't give a shit about the Statute of Secrecy or that of those in control of the Government any longer. Plus with Dumbledore holding three different Jobs/Positions that is too much power Dumbledore is Corrupted by it even though he wouldn't agree or see it in himself or those blindly loyal to him. He should only have one job and no more. But with his age, he is quite out of touch with the world as a whole. Plus The Potters and the Blacks with their Allies need to get outside help from the Quern and the Prime Minister. They need to see they can't do this on their own their are just too few but the Blackmail information would be of use so the Queen knows who to Strip of their Titles. Dumbledore claims he cares about the bots and the Children but what he just did proves otherwise. Because he kept The Potters from doing what is best for the safety of their children.

Plus that old goat is deserving of a severe spanking to get the point across. And he is so full of himself and a control freak that he leaves that he is the only one who has the wisdom to make decisions and everyone else doesn't. He believes he has the right to decide everything for everyone and that they are to simply follow his orders without question. Plus the old goat also seems to still believe that Lily and Petunia ate related by blood thinking those stupid blood ward would work to protect the boys but they wouldn't. By Albus's sheer stupidity they would have been abused and possibly murdered. Plus they would lie about the boys slandering them and most of Surry believing the lies.

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