Aww, so cute and funny

Cute. I think it stands well enough on its own, but it'd work better with more support. At the very least, the evening that follows, possibly from the other perspective.

This was a neat little one-shot. There isn't anywhere near enough stories for Hikari and Miyako, so it was good to see this! A shame it's listed as complete because I wouldn't mind seeing the date. But I digress. Great work!