As to Shaw, the movie has one big question regarding her and David and what has been seen of it. Why? It's never explained either.

Beautiful fic,hope you can write more about them ,I saw the film yesterday and was hoping to find some fics about them,thank you!

I wish this had been the movie! I would have liked it much better. Very well written, I hope you'll consider writing more after you've viewed the movie. Fix it! :)

Thanks for the great read.

OMG! You have written this brilliant piece before the opening of the Aliev Covenant. It's like totally spot on!

I am amazed!

Lovely job. I like the use of "Nature Boy" running through it. I, too, am excited about "Covenant" lol

I have to applaud you. This was very well written and pretty much felt as if it were in the movie. Unless you can predict the future.. lol. Hopefully you write more to continue! Good job once more.