Love this story about Harry's parents. Beautiful writing, just the right tone! Thank you.

Nicely done! I hope you keep writing this story; I'd love to see more of Maggie and Malcolm through your eyes.

Ok, can I just say that I love this story?
I love how you captured the 'I like you, but we can take this too far' vibe between Maggie and Malcolm. It was fun to see how they got to know each other and how they were both attracted to each other for very different reasons. If you ever pick up this story again, I shall excitedly look forward to the next chapter.

A very good story so far. Well written and well paced. Keep at it, and don't let it become another good story ended before its time.

Malcolm Dresden sounds like an amazing man. We could really use more men like him in the world.I liked seeing where Harry gets his compassion

It's so cute. But Dude! You can't leave it like that.

I love how you portray Malcom. It totally explains why Maggie fell in love with him. Not realistic because most women would never realize what awesome guy he was. Most want money and success. Those of us that work every day, and sustain our family are totally forgotten. A true gentle man is always forgotten. Awesome, you have to finish this story!

Brilliant, bloody brilliant. I just finished Skin Game and was feeling lost until a came across this, wow. It's wonderfully worded and draw out perfectly. I can see both aspects of harry and Thomas in them and it's beautiful. Malcolm is exactly how I pictured him and Maggie is Trouble with the capital T. Gahhh, it's really good. I can't wait to read more.

This was beautiful! Wonderfully written and the characterization was spot on. If you're ever planning on writing a sequel to this to connect it to canon, it would be an amazing read.