This is a good fun light hearted story, but i kinda expected more. You have two great series, both filled with action and adventure, but none of that really gets shown.

In the forest, you explained Harry's magic and Belle getting taught things, but when it shifted to the potter verse, he used none of that magic. You also set up a lot with Rumple taking all the knowlage of the Wizardng world, but it went knowhere. Ill give you one thing, the way you adapted the Owl enchantments, ive never seen that before. Absolutly brilliant.

In the Potter verse, you did some really good world setting; Hogwarts, the castle they bought, Harry making friends, Dumbledore interfering, but you never expanded on it, and it was all but forgotten in Storybrook

And in Storybrook, the same basic things happened as in the potterverse. Really really good world buildup and character establishment, but no action, no problem solving, nothing that made Once Upom a Time a good, enjoyable series to watch.

All in all, a really great story thay falls short because of the lack of action. With the amount of world building, you could have easily done 20 to 30 more chapters, just on plain conflict, problem solving and plot arcs.

Yaaay! You saved Graham!

cool

Love the story just wish Harry had more involvement precise and going to Hogwarts in my opinion Ennis meeting Lily in the beginning there wasn't much crossover. But spite all that I still really love the story and maybe hope to see a sequel or something. )

and they all lived happily ever after XD

regina isnt gunna like that but not much she can do ab a person she dont have dirt or leverage over

thanks to pandora's box dumbles plans just went up in smoke XD

So no Happy Ending for Harry I would of loved Harry And Regina everyone would be like da fuk haha

Always hated Henry that kid is a little disrespectful shit i would of gotten rid of he's ass if I landed in that world

I like the story but I think you did a lot of overviewing and focused very little on Harry at all. He may as well not have been there except for the knowledge and care that his presence provided.

A very sweet story. Very enjoyable.

loved it

Love the fic just sad Harry never got his happy ending, would of been interesting if Luna or Hermione was standing with him when Rumple was resurrected by Riddle.

Its been a long time since I found a good fanfic that had an acctual ending :)

and horcruxes are completely disregarded.
this is great, thank you.