Update soon, please

Aww man. That was quite the heart-pounding escape. A costly one at that. It's unfortunate that the temporary good mood was spoiled. I hope I'm wrong about what happened, but I won't be surprised if I'm right.

Sweet chapter! Good work!

Ya done did us dirty my friend. Could you imagine, just sitting in a transport and completely unable to help those outside it, scary stuff. Here's to the next.

Good, even if just work.

Sweet. That was quite a skillful infiltration and a nicely improvised escape. I'm sure that whatever Jaune and Blake thought they were missing will come up to be an issue soon. That should be very interesting.

Nice chapter! Good work!

I must say, You've done a fantastic job on your latest chapter. You really nailed down the atmosphere and tension well and created a very lively and engaging AU story. I very much look forward to how this AU proceeds forward from here.

Pretty good chapter, i can't wait to see next battles and if Cinder and her minions will have any role. Keep up the good work and see you later, i hope you're enjoying this volume, thath you had a good Christmas and thath you will have a great year.

My, that is certainly a worrisome development. While having friends on the council is certainly good, the attack by the Maiden's agents is definitely bad. Luckily Qrow was close enough to help. Heh. Lucky and Qrow.

Anyway, Eliza seems pleasant enough. Don't think I can say much else at this point.

Nice chapter! Good work!

Pretty good chapter, Qrow's entrance was very badass(but since he's a techear at Signal i doubt there could be rumors about him dead. And i still hope he will be Ruby's fater). I hope to see JNPR again, same advice of always, keep up the good work and see you later.

Oh, very nice! Some neat character interactions, most amusingly Blake and Jaune. That was surprisingly fun.

Hmm. Weiss certainly shined in the end there. Neat.

Ah, but with dwindling supplies and the target not yet located, I fear that things will take a very bad turn. That will be interesting, regardless.

Cool chapter! Good work!

Nice recon chapter with a lot of infiltration and a decently worked out idea of why the Grimm stick around in the city. You really had a lot of ideas in this chapter and one by one they were nicely presented. Good job and I am interested in your next chapter.
Saluut.

Hmm...Well, being whittled down and that extreme exhaution is a decent explaination for the Aura thing...
Something still feels a bit off, but meh...I'll leave it be.

Uhm...Where are their Aura?
You know, the thing that shield them from bullets, fall from Terminal Velocity, being punted through a concrete pillar by a mech, heals all cuts and bruises in seconds while boost the healing of the body significantly, and boost their physical capabilities beyond that of Aura-locked human?
So far, I feel like I am reading a standard RPG fantasy story that happens to have Grimm...
Fighting for hours wouldn't explain why their Aura didn't restore naturally overtime, nor does it explains how the hell did they receive so many strong hits that their Aura shattered (or cease to exist in the sense of the plot) so early into the fight, leaving them fighting without it for the remaining of the fight, showing that they do indeed have the skill needed, to actually keep their aura last by not receiving serious injuries while their aura are down...

Hello, pretty good chapter, even if it lacked of action. I can't wait to see the next fights, i hope to see also some Arkos moment and thath you liked my theory. Keep up the good work and see you later.

A splendid fight with a Geist! Nice demonstration of tactics, and generally pleasant to read.

I wonder what sort of trouble the other four have gotten into?

Nice chapter! Good work!