| Reviews for Memoirs of a Former Shinobi |
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luffyxrobin-luffyxnami chapter 7 . 12/3/2018 whelp already 7 chapters in and im done with the fic. glad you at least clarified that you would be ruining the fic by making it where even in the 3rd person you would be referring to naruto as taiyang, which is absolutely horrid when you are thinking about it grammatically. so smooth going. anyway it was fun till this point. hope to find a diff. fic that doesn't fk up as much. |
Guest chapter 20 . 11/23/2018 Whatever happened to Danzo, Ann’s to Karin Uzumaki!? What about Jiraiya!? I am surprised that Minato didn’t go on to SLAUGHTER the ones in Konoha responsible for his son’s exile and “death”!? |
bankai777 chapter 20 . 11/25/2018 Would Minato be happy for his son. |
CAV2003 chapter 20 . 11/24/2018 honestamente me encanta este fic es uno de los mejores que he visto lo único que no me gusto fue que sasuke se llevara toda el poder del sabio y que naruto no tenga todo su poder |
dandyrr0403 chapter 20 . 11/23/2018 Thanks for the updates! Will you make a chapter where Ino told Sasuke and co that Naruto's still alive? Keep up the great work! Hope you'll update again soon! |
god of all chapter 20 . 11/23/2018 Great chapter and story so far please continue this story soon. |
Guest chapter 19 . 10/2/2018 I only read 2 chapter cause I don't like flashbacks I hated it in the actual naruto and the side arcs to and I can see you won't be finishing this flash back till you get to 28 chapter or something just next time you make a story put flashbacks in when there necessary not a FULL FLASHBACK STORY. |
Animortal28 chapter 19 . 9/3/2018 Sooo did Tai get date raped by Raven? |
Haseo55 chapter 19 . 9/3/2018 Wow. Raven lauthing because if a prank. The scene with Ino was nice and unexpected. Its either forshadowing something for the future or just to put the naruto part to rest once and for all. The thing with the second chakra source makes me think is Salem, Kaguya or Black zetsu. But one I think could be more interesting is that the chakra source is of an unborn Yang in Raven's belly. |
Guest chapter 19 . 9/3/2018 Carolina is going to be Pyrrha’s mom!? WHO is the other Chakra Source!? Is it Salem!? Will this Chakra Source heavily affect the story!? Was Naruto’s heritage finally revealed to Konoha!? What happened to Karin (she is the last hope of continuing the line of Asura)!? Did Minato get brought back during the 4th War, only to learn that his son was “dead” mainly due to the actions of Konoha!? |
bankai777 chapter 19 . 9/3/2018 What will Ino say to Sasuke? |
dandyrr0403 chapter 19 . 9/3/2018 Thanks for the update! That was a nice chapter, especially the scene where Tai said his goodbye to Ino and by extension his past, I would like to see the Elemental Nations reaction after hearing about Naruto condition as well! And the pdank was hilarious! In the omake is Carolina help giving birth to Pyrrha!? Keep being awesome! Hope you'll update again soon! |
Kyuubi-kun45 chapter 19 . 9/3/2018 Was that omake telling the birth of Pyrrha? |
bankai777 chapter 18 . 9/2/2018 Have Yang and Ruby learn about Kushina. |
Czar Joseph chapter 18 . 9/1/2018 Since Naruto/Taiyang taken his time for his life with Summer, after regain his chakra, and graduate in Beacon, so far that regarding he did spend years to relearn any basics and improved since then. Anyway, Qrow brought Yang since Raven didn't told Naruto/Tai about her pregnancy. And until he told Naruto about her Yang's biological mother. I hope that this next chapter will be sure regarding his past, or something up-come like the when his daughters (Yang and Ruby) was at Haven, and I'm sure that he will decide to help them regarding the secret war between Ozpin and Salem. I'm still looked forward for this... |