Reviews for Dead Man's Burden
Frank Lopez chapter 11 . 8/26
A sad ending for this story but atleast we have goobye
Najee chapter 11 . 8/26
Yep, I knew this story was dead. It sucks though because I really would love to see the monsters' (Four Heavenly Knights, Alice etc.) reactions towards Six. Six spent too long on the angel side and not enough on the monster side. But that's okay. I can't wait to see what else you'll do with MGQ.

Good luck on your Danmachi crossover rework, buddy.
ZombieSlayers chapter 11 . 5/24
Aww man I really liked this story...
THE GREAT AARON chapter 11 . 5/11
I see...

Don't pressure yourself too much to do something you don't want to do.

Cheers to you for making this story!
whu4c0.august.98 chapter 11 . 5/9
9 months, no update... should I start thinking this is dead... (please dont be dead, please dont be dead, please dont be dead)
jf007867 chapter 1 . 9/14/2019
Love the story keep the good work my friend
doomqwer chapter 3 . 8/29/2019
started reading this and hope that you get more time to write
MarcusAurelias chapter 11 . 5/22/2019
Not bad enjoyed it a lot hope life decides to finally give you a bit of a break.
Fleece Johnson chapter 11 . 5/6/2019
I saw this was an update and was so happy, then I saw short-notice and felt internal dread. Once I saw what it was about it was't too bad. I also agree that Ecstasy is doing a sequel to MGQ that I like much more then Paradox. I'm not a fan of the combat Paradox uses, I don't like the alt-reality shtick, and while I appreciate the vast roster of characters at first I found out that they are not really well developed which is a shame.
Sixes chapter 2 . 4/25/2019
You can't make the courier both a bitch, and a badass.
Ever heard the quote, "If you keep jumping from one side of the fence to the other, you might just get impaled on it."
That's what your story did in the first chapter. Six acts like a badass, then a submissive bitch.
It killed the story's entire momentum.
The Teletrap chapter 2 . 4/24/2019
Your description of items kinda breaks your flow. Just say “Before he hit the ground, Courier 6 quickly jabbed himself with a Med-X syringe.”

People reading this will know what basic crap like Med-X is.
Thog chapter 11 . 4/22/2019
Man why do u have to play with my heart with that update. Jk happy to see that your still with us. Good luck with college! :)
Unzealots chapter 11 . 4/21/2019
T-T sure I can wait a bit... just don't be dead unless your gonna announce that you will stop this story.
Arkimanser chapter 11 . 4/20/2019
it's ok i can wait.
Lord of Moons chapter 10 . 4/3/2019
This is surprisingly good. People complain about the Courier being weak, but in MGQ people focus on close combat. There is also no martial arts experts or sword hobbyists left after the war, since guns are more effective. Not to mention skill points which are a bit like magic and actual magic. Even with the Couriers technology, there is a limit, so him adapting in this way makes the most sense, otherwise the story doesn't have much to go on. Looking forward to more.
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