Reviews for My Adventure
god of all chapter 1 . 1/18/2018
Great chapter and story so far please continue this story soon.
Elfin69 chapter 1 . 4/1/2017
So who is asleep next to her and how will she grow up being part Digital and part human
Boyzilla chapter 1 . 3/19/2017
Well, un, if Kuranai knows about magic then that means she had a magical parent herself for her to know about that to tell Yggdrasil about it.

Though, it would be more in depth if you would just had a gentle conversation between the two.

Your grammar is... Well, it's readable for a fanfic and really as long as it is then it is already far better than most. My question is how Kuranai, being magical, could have possibly interfaces with EDEN as the Harry Potter universe's magic doesn't really agree with electricty, as possibly by proxy, digital energy.

Guess I'll watch this story as it progresses. I hope you improve on your story narration skills too, as you seemed to rush things a bit when it would have been nicer to have longer character moments to better explain the story and develop them.