One if the best fanfiction i have ever read. The emotiins, the details and creativity storyline. I love it so much i reread it to appreciate it better. Please write more fanfiction! Your creativity is just oozing out of you

Dear Lord

Well that was deep. I dont know how to feel haha great fic!

It's umm...great bechloe story I've ever read. Ending is soo sweet. Well written. Keep writing. You are amazing writer.

This was 99% a fantastic story. The Aubrey/Jesse stuff at the end kept it from being perfect

i like this. I'm guessing at the end of chapter four, when Chloe asks Death to do one good thing for her and he declines at first- but I see what you did there, having her be reborn again as Kyle's daughter. You conveyed how important he was to her, alongside Aubrey. I also liked the subtle hint that Aubrey and Jesse met in grievance class and had a child together. Interesting.

Such a good story. Was not expected that ending or the way chloe died but very satisfied with what you chose! Hope you write more bechloe in the future :)

absolutely amazing i loved it

Very interesting ending. Chloe's life, explained at the end of this story was quite interesting. Also interesting that you changed their names at the end.
This has been a very fascinating story.

I really love how you ended this story. I love how you talk about Chloe's life, and how shitty it was, and how finally her death was just an accident. The last scene is also cute.

Anyway, I don't remember if I already left a review for this story or not, but it was a very original one, and the relation between Chloe and Beca was super cute, so that's good that they are kind of meeting each other again during their new life... Hopefully, their new life will be better than their previous one!

I feel like every new chapter posted, this story gets better and better

Wow, I have called other stories amazing, so I'm not sure what to describe this one. The creativity of it is amazing. One does not expect to read an existentialist work on a fan fiction site. I really have no idea what happens next, but I look forward to reading it. Please post more soon.

Wow, that was amazing. I have no words, just stunned at how amazing that was. Kudos.

So beautiful

and somewhere out there, in the living world, you could imagine the monitor on Beca's hospital room on a haywire beeping so fast...

Ugh I'll definitely wait for the next update, and I think I would have taken Chloe's hand with no second doubts if she's the last thing I see before I completely die*siiiiggggghhhh*