| Reviews for Pride of The West |
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   Black Parade Killjoy chapter 6 . 8/18/2019 Please continue ️ |
| DaddyChad chapter 1 . 7/2/2019 273AC is when Tyrion is born... |
| Unbenannt chapter 5 . 6/15/2019 What? Margaery would be 12 in 295 AC |
| RandomSomething chapter 3 . 12/29/2018 Okay it was cool but Jason was born in 276 correct? Margery wasn’t born until 286 making him 10 years her senior. She’d only be 3 years old right now while Jason is 13... |
| RandomSomething chapter 2 . 12/29/2018 Oooh Red Rain huh? Surely that makes Tywin feel good since I was once the sword of House Reyne. |
| Guest chapter 6 . 11/6/2018 The story reads very unnaturally - almost zero emotions conveyed during dialogue and most of the story is spent telling instead of showing. Most grating though his how you repeat canon events even with Jason being there already having changed everything. It reeks of lazy writing and really pulls you out of the story. If him being there just results in everything being the same anyway, why bother adding him in the first place? |
| Guest chapter 6 . 8/29/2018 Great chapter, you really are talented, though are you gonna finish the story, you have a great idea that I have seen very little of elsewhere. Thanks for brightening my day. |
| twerp22 chapter 6 . 7/22/2018 it seems like every time I find a good fanfic, they abandon it right when it is getting good |
| Zurver chapter 6 . 4/5/2018 I love it Update soon |
| sad sabrin chapter 6 . 2/7/2018 Nice |
| Goingmuffin3343 chapter 6 . 1/20/2018 Update |
| Tunak23 chapter 5 . 11/17/2017 Hey man continue the idea,can get better! Waiting for your return |
| trollzor69 chapter 6 . 10/31/2017 Not bad can't wait to see more |
| DentingZero4 chapter 2 . 9/2/2017 I don't know if anyone has told you this before but your oc sounds very similar to Griffith from Berserk. (Not personality wise.) |
| Feanor-dutch chapter 1 . 8/2/2017 Who has this same plote line? |
