Reviews for Kingdom
Sebine chapter 6 . 5/10/2018
wish this wasn't dead
The Nachoman chapter 6 . 4/1/2017
Well, while this isn't the first story I've seen about Danny getting powers, it certainly is the first one where he f goes villain. Furthermore, I like your depiction of Coilbe might be an unscrupulous bastard, but he isn't idiotic enough to try and pressure a bio tinker. Who would ever be stupid enough to have a happy Blasto go Bonesaw, after all.
Andoma chapter 3 . 3/13/2017
Jess (Genesis) has been a in a wheelchair since she was four.
Her paralysis has nothing to do with her powers.
thatguy chapter 6 . 3/5/2017
This is pretty interesting. I wonder if Danny has had a Frankenstein moment with thoughts of trying to revive Taylor yet.
Shadow of God chapter 6 . 3/4/2017
Didn't you point out him noticing that guy so he could figure out that they had a spy listening in? Danny isn't that stupid. No one with a normal IQ and some experience with a spy thriller wouldn't figure that out.
Shadow of God chapter 2 . 3/4/2017
I know that it's easy for characters in the show to believe that coil has some all seeing eye type of ability but we the readers know better. He isn't omniscient. So how did he know about Danny so fucking fast? It's almost absurd. I hope to get an explanation either in the story soon or from you.
Greatazuredragon chapter 6 . 3/3/2017
So Lisa enters the picture.
Nice chapter, good work.
Lucem Yoru chapter 5 . 3/2/2017
Wow I'm liking this, haven't tried many Danny stories before but if there are at least one other like this then I probably should.

Will we get an interlude somewhere in the future to show the PRT's thoughts on Kingdom?
michael68 chapter 5 . 3/2/2017
What exactly is Kingdom's specialty? Organic technology? Flesh-crafting? Is he the "animal" counterpart to Blasto's "botany"?

Danny is a grieving father, so it'd be nice if Noelle became a surrogate daughter to him. If/when Noelle is cured or gets her mutation stabilized, Danny could be the only person she feels comfortable touching.

By the way, I liked the scene where Danny and Bitch interacted. It's rare to see Bitch not being aggressive, aloof, or socially inept.
Salvare chapter 4 . 3/2/2017
V *not coming
Salvare chapter 5 . 3/1/2017
So is his power a mix of Bonesaw's and Blasto's ones?
I thought only Lisa knew Coil was Undersiders' boss? How was Regent there?
Why are PRT and Protectorate coming to Danny? He is the obvious suspect.

That's said, I like the fic all in all, keep it up.
Greatazuredragon chapter 5 . 3/1/2017
Wonder if he will end up joining the Travelers?
Nice chapter, good work.
Greatazuredragon chapter 4 . 2/28/2017
Nice chapter, looking forward to more, good work.
Guest chapter 3 . 2/27/2017
She cant be weak to only electricity right?
Guest chapter 2 . 2/27/2017
Id stick her in a box full a tampons with electrical wiring.
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