YOU ALIVE! I THOUGHT THAT YOU DIE!. I wait for another episode. see ya

Are you going finish this story?

please add more chapters soon as possible

The history os good

very nice though i noticed some characters personalities were a bit off great story anyway though

I die... I'm sorry... but that line was painful to read...

You did a really great job I don't know this manga a lot but I have a friend who always talk to me about it (she's crazy). So just keep writing it's really good and your English is also surprising for a french ! Great fanfiction

how is blood lost a minor injurie

oooo shit... think nagisa, think. meaby something badass situation? aaaa whatever i like your story. take care.

Nice alternate Storyline, hope I'll see more in Future, see u next Chapter

damm! Nice Chapter. I want more! I have hope that you want to make this story long, like add some more your ideas. See ya!

It's an interesting twist so far, and I'm guess 214 is a reference to the Valentine's Day chapter, amd 15 is the number of hits he gave her in the original canon kiss.

"People have no manners in this fanfiction,always slamming doors!" That one line ruined the intense atmospher XDD

Thank you for the review. I'm going to make more chapter . I'm doing what I can because It's the first time I write a story in a foreign language.
Nagikae shipper.

I like the story... but a proofreader wouldn't hurt... and the problem with uploading chapters piece by piece is we only are notified when you upload a whole new chapter.