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Anibalssj chapter 1 . 4/11/2018 Not overly fan of POV as they tend to be poorly written but you have a good prose, keep it up |
JustSomeIdiot chapter 1 . 7/12/2017 I just found this stroy, and I fell for it already... I sincerely hope that you are going to continue this. P.S LOVE THE STORY! PLZ Continue... |
fristknight chapter 1 . 7/4/2017 Liking this, this is a go place to start I hope Quick Silver lives. |
Jedi Alex Colbent chapter 1 . 6/12/2017 ...My God... WHY is there not more of this? This is AWESOME! |
victor0606 chapter 1 . 6/1/2017 Keep writing Please xD |
Juan chapter 1 . 5/10/2017 Can you please uplode more chapters about this i really like this please |
MusicLover315 chapter 1 . 4/16/2017 OOOOOOOOO Continue please! This is already good and I want to see more! I hope you keep writing and update soon :D |
Deadpool64 chapter 1 . 4/6/2017 This is great start I can't wait to see what happens as the story unfolds. |
Guest chapter 1 . 3/28/2017 Update please |
Guest chapter 1 . 3/22/2017 Keep up the good work |
Bkaa19 chapter 1 . 2/27/2017 This has a lot of potential. Really looking forward to more chapters. I did notice a few things though. Some are a little nitpicky but they don't really detract from your story at all so it doesn't matter if you correct them or not. This one is nerd nitpicky and doesn't matter if you correct it or not. When Hawkeye asked Gohan if he was a meta-human . . . that is more of a DC term than a Marvel one. If you noticed in the beginning of Age of Ultron people with abilities were referred to as Enhanced. Agents of Shield used this terminology as well. Like I said, not a big thing at all since the terms pretty much mean the same thing. The 2nd one is Gohan's missing limb. I would have made it more apparent sooner. Like when he is using his ki to checkout his body. It makes more sense to make it obvious or noticeable that he is missing an arm to then transition to when he forgot he is missing an arm while fighting an Ultron drone. This makes sense because he is probably still not used to fighting with one arm. Also, when Quicksilver made the remark about Gohan's chest wound being debilitating he could have also mentioned Gohan missing an arm because how is Quicksilver to know when Gohan lost it? Still really enjoyed your story and I hope you update soon. |
kakarotsanmistic chapter 1 . 2/23/2017 awesome story so you have my support so keep it up... I want some dbz style action like punching shockwaves that shock the entire landmass and heavy lifting like mountains buildings and cars buses and asteroids and Lot's of destruction in dbz style than your story will be worth reading your story... and don't make dbz/s characters nerf and underpower because they are so op and strong (multiversal level) so better remain this and how much gohan will use his powers against marvel characters like 1% or 2% something because you already know how op z character are so please don't make them weak OK...and please I want a action pack story so please do it.. |
Guest chapter 1 . 2/23/2017 Pretty good idea for a DBZ X Avengers crossover. Though do you intend to put any other DB charcters? Also how powerful is Gohan (at full strength) compared to the other charcters in this story? Could you provide a power scaling list between the characters in your story? Overall, pretty interesting chapter. I look foward to your next update! |
X3runner chapter 1 . 2/22/2017 This is really intresting is quicksilver going to be safe since he is going to be in a slightly different path also dose gohan only have one arm through your whole story or is he going to get a biological prosthetic through a similar method the semi organic body of vision was made they have the tech to print body parts or am I miss remembering ? I really injoyed how neat and tidy your writing was while remaining duscriptive. I do wish it was a bit longer but that's just because your writings quality. I have to say awesome job I can't wait to see more work from you. |