I’ve read your stories before. You are better than this.

Update

loved it.. Love them together.

Read this before and loved it still do.

Okay, so plenty of unanswered questions. Who showed up when she was with Demetri? What was in that last envelope? Did the Cullens get their just deserts? Why did Aro come for her? So much more to explain. Excellent story though.

Debacle...

She needs to grow a pair and not give a damn what happens to the squirrel munchers since it is their fault she is in the cluster f**I she is in.

Reread this crazy wonderful story for the x? time. Love your storytelling gifts and most of your stories. Maybe someday you could write an outtake that covers some of what happened with Demetri in the nasty bar, was it the Cullens who showed up there? The envelope? What happened to the Volturi after Aro supposedly died? What happened to the Cullens since Isabella was dead set against them getting off scott free ... .

Still love ya regardless. Just wishful thinking here. :-)

Damn dude Jasper is a dick period.

Another fantastic read well done

There were some unanswered questions. Why did the Volturi come after her? Was there no punishment for the Cullens? Did the wolves just not look for her anymore? What about Victoria? What was in the envelope at the bar & how did Jasper get there to bring her back to Peter? It seemed a bit rushed at the end here to be honest. And while I realize you didn't label it romance, it would have been nice to at least see them kiss.

She's putting this all on them & not taking any responsibility herself. She's partly to blame. She didn't relent on wanting to know. Edward didn't want to tell her anything, kept hiding it from her. She's the one that got Jake to tell her the stories, she's the one that got the book from the bookstore. She looked into it. She came to the conclusion of what they were. Just because Eddie owned up to it, wouldn't have changed that she already knew. She decided the risk was worth it. And this Hate for Jasper? If it wasn't for him then she would have never had Peter's number to go to for help. She's being a hypocrite.

Omg, the moment she cried out 'not fair' I wanted to slap her. What did she think would happen when she RESEARCHED them, trying to figure out what they were. Now she has to take responsibility for her part in that. And Edward needs to take responsibility, because he's the one that saved her from the truck, jump starting her curiosity.

i can't wait to find out the answer to all of leon's questions about the cullens.

interesting. So what happened to the Cullens? Were they the ones that Demetri noticed? how did she end up with Jasper? Why were the wolves being so stalkery?

Love this story but seemed so unfinished or rushed at the end don't know how to say it but even though I love this story of makes me sort of sad cause seems so much just is...