| Reviews for The Demon's Valentine: The Fairest One of All II |
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BowieQueen chapter 26 . 3/4 I liked your dark jareth. I'm not usually a dark jareth reader but I enjoyed this a lot. ThanK you :) I hope there is a 3rd one. |
julie5 chapter 26 . 8/23/2019 oh bloody hell I did this to myself and I don't regret it one bit! please let me know when you upodate Julie5 on ao3 and here but unfortunately I have no access to my account here. Absolutely amazing! |
julie5 chapter 20 . 8/23/2019 im not crying! You're crying! the sequel I always wished for |
Julie5 chapter 18 . 8/23/2019 I am moved to tears by this and thats not just the wine I have been drinking |
Theskyatdawn2 chapter 26 . 6/13/2018 Frikin awesome job needs a 3 sequel. |
glossary chapter 1 . 6/12/2018 there is something about both this and the fairest one of all that - it contains both the flow of an old-style fairy tale and something modern and wryly self-aware which i really enjoy. you have all my admiration, you're a fantastic writer, your characters are sharply drawn, and i'm so happy you've shared this |
the yellow flower chapter 26 . 5/20/2018 Wait...is that the end...? But but but I want to know what happens next. Are you writing another part of this story where the world falls down? I just...I just want more...a lot more... does that make me greedy...? |
the yellow flower chapter 25 . 5/20/2018 “And suppressing your gag reflex” Ha. Ha. Ha. #thingsyoudonteverwanttohavetolearnfromypurmother cringe. |
the yellow flower chapter 14 . 5/17/2018 Not going to lie...I popped over to AO3 to see what you had cooked up. Honestly, I’ve read stuff of the same caliber on FF. I guess some stuff they check closer and other they don’t? Anywho...that was fun to read lol |
the yellow flower chapter 12 . 5/17/2018 Yeah...I don’t know... Okay, 1) Setting Phillip free was beautiful. As a part of the LGBTQ community, I loved this. However, 2) why did That have to be Sarah’s first time having sex? Like, is there some future where she looks back and says, Yeah my first time I was possessed by a man and set his ghost free and then woke up crying. Like...erm...I dunno man. Maybe not the best first time, eh? |
the yellow flower chapter 9 . 5/16/2018 WHOA. That game was so intense! Wow! I’m freaking hooked! Also, glad to know Sarah’s a bit bewitched on the sex front. I was kind of worried there. So many ties. Dang. Jareth has been scheming fo sho. I’m, like, ugh, how do I not keep reading? But you know, work and stuff haha. I’ll check back later. Hope you’re enjoying my onslaught of reviews haha |
the yellow flower chapter 8 . 5/16/2018 Okay, this visual of them two of them playing Scrabble in a dorm room had me rolling. Very clever. Where do you come up with this stuff? |
the yellow flower chapter 6 . 5/16/2018 I can’t believe I’m saying this, but I’m with Jareth on this one: Sarah! Get your self together! Take a shower at least! And wash your sheets! C’mon girl! SMH. |
the yellow flower chapter 5 . 5/16/2018 BUUUUUURRRNNNN! Okay, Sarah has been totally rude in this chapter. I’m glad she didn’t get what she wanted! Please tell me she’s sniffing something in the air that’s making her so sex-crazed? Her cutting at Nan and Polly was much. Yep. I’m glad she didn’t get what she wanted. Even if it’s from Jareth being a sore loser and yet...where would the dreams be coming from if not him...? Is this all to break her into surrendering down the road? Hmmmmm... |
the yellow flower chapter 4 . 5/16/2018 1) Jareth is a cruel dude 2) At the same time what he’s doing may just work to break up this trio 3) Daaaaang Sarah chill! She’s an emotional possessive roller coaster! Yeesh, gurl! 4) Hmmm so Jareth was just like, here’s my heart. K thx bai... wow buddy...erm...what if they had destroyed the box? If he knew Sarah would destroy it without opening it he’s playing all of them and it huurrrts how easily he’s already making it to be... |