what's with the ending aren't you going to write about what's going to happen to ash?

Please continue this

Please update this story because for three reason:
1) I want to see Ash's new personality after being betrayed.
2) I want to see how Lillie is gonna bring Ash back to the light.
3) I want to see the world's reaction to see what Ash has become and knowing that he was framed for attacking Oak.
So please update I really want to know what will happen.

Type your review story is epic. when is the next chapter, i cant wait to see the next chapter

interesting. need more!

The Shadow Clan appears to be an evil organization that's manipulating Ash and is likely responsible for the video as well...but holy shit their ideology actually VERY convincing.

I may not completely agree with the Shadow Clan's cause in the future of this story, but I will say that I can DEFINITELY understand the allure of the organization and how people could get sucked into it. Hell, if I got exiled from society, you can bet your ass that I would be tempted to join as well.

I noticed that Cynthia, Brandon, and possibly Paul may be on Ash's side. Think about it, all three of those trainers are heavy-hitters. If high-ranking trainers like that support Ash, even if in secret, is at least a small victory against the catastrophic downward plunge that was inflicted on Ash.

Not to mention that Paul alone is one SCARY motherfucker and he seems like the type to think shit through before making a decision. In the anime, I always saw Paul as the most competent and capable of Ash's rivals.

I can see Paul supporting Ash on the down low, or at least being skeptical of the court rulings and the video evidence.

Lastly, I do believe there may be other groups, besides the Shadow Clan, out in the world that consider Ash innocent behind closed doors.

A story this good deserves a good review and I hope I satisfied that here.

I look forward to see where this story is heading.

If you want to reply to me, you are free to do so.

i really like this story, and i wonder if looker is really a good guy or only a man that want glory by his job than true justice.

Anyway, i hope that ash will get a revenge against the traitors, the mankind maybe will be spare once that they see their mistake and try to ammend it, but the traitors must burn in hell, especially iris and misty.

update pls

JUST FRIGGIN UPDATE!I'M DYING FOR THIS STORY BECAUSE IT ISN'T ONE OF THE BEST, BUT THE, THE BEST AND I mean THE best story. It felt like I was in place of Ash and it felt like his emotions were converted into the right words.

please don't abandon this story. if the other stories are diamonds, this story is a blue diamond. please

Fuck Luxraylover! This is great shit and that guy is a no talent loser, who does not know talent when he sees it!

I wasn't too convinced about it in a first chapter but after reading this one I'm totally sure what you've conjured up is a total nonsense. This thing is a garbage you made Pikachu a electric mouse stronger than Arceus himself and Charizard... this part is so laughable. His presence is so menacing that a pack Mightyenas are nothing but a bunch squealing pups and Conkeldurs are running behind taking cover behind humans. You've totally lost me and I thought I could give it a chance considering it's Ash/Lillie shipping and I'm so done with (Bunny years) amourshipping but if the plot is so nonsensical might as well give them a try till there's a better writer writing them.

Have everyone see halutionations about ash walking laughing and being kind

also i suspect that maybe looker is a corrupt law officer, because his way to deal with the criminals is extreme, because even if the so called ash's crime was horrible, he don't was charged by murder or any crime to this level, he only was charged by physical assault and despite of this, looker don't have qualms of label ash as a terrorist.

And clearly looker show that his reasons to label ash as terrorist wasn't by attack to oak, he make it because ash humiliate him and his team, even he admit it to his secretary to say that ash make him appear a fool. Then looker is a corrupt law officer to abuse of his powers to his own glory and public image, showing that looker is not, but a false hero that only want have a good public image, instead uphold the true justice. Even the story of the shadow klan can support the possibility that looker is a corrupted man that don't mind the people, only himself.

Then i think that even if ash prove his innocence somehow, i want that looker will pay by his selfish actions and he will be arrested and hated by the people as ash was it.

i have a interesting theory regarding to the crime that frame of ash.

i think that it can be two possibles outcomes:
- the most possible theory and the most obvious is that the bad guys tamper the video that show the criminal attack to professor oak, or maybe that the criminal was disguise as ash to make sure that the camera confirm the so called ash's crime

- the other outcome and worse to ash is that maybe in some point when ash was in pallet town, he was hypnotized by a psychic pokemon of the bad guys and he was forced to attack to professor oak and after put him in coma, ash brainwashed, return to the place in that him was put in hypnosis and as result, ash don't remember attack to the professor oak and as consequence, he also lack any possible evidence or key witness to prove his innocence, sealing his fate as an outcast in the world forever.