The Spirit World, man it sure is dangerous. I pity Eusine, if he hadn't become so obsessed with Suicune that wouldn't have happened but it had to be done.

Well, we have reached the end. I'm glad because Lance
and Lyra have their happy ending but, at the same time, it saddens me because I' ve had soo much fun reading this story and now it's finished. At least I can read it again whenever I want (I'll make sure to check out Ravaged World too when I have time).

it's me or am i wrong by telling you don't like eusine ? :o

Great chapter, can't wait read to your next story!

Great chapter!

you put morty with whitney for the dance i'm so happy :) also is the blonde guy volkner who dance with jasmine i will be double happy if its the case x) also lance and lyra are finally together it was about time x') good chapter again x 3

Oh boy, things got interesting again. I hope that they manage to make it out ok, Lyra seems to be in a really delicate state the poor thing.

oh shit i feel so bad for the pokemon of lyra and lance and lyra and lance too ;; it's all blue's fault èoé i pray someone gonna come to their help maybe red, clair or karen and the others can't wait for next chapter :)

that was a good battle ! x) and liked all lance and lyra interactions in it . :D since lance is going to blackthorn i hope he be on good terms with claire again next chapter :)

I read chapter 27 yesterday and today chapter 28 is updated, just in time, lucky me! But argh, dammit, Blue had to interfere when it seemed that everything was going to be fine. I hope that Lance arrives in time, as always I'll wait patiently for the next chapter 3

Great chapter! Lyra vs Red coming soon!

Aww, I remember that this was one of my favourite chapters, it's been a pleasure to read it again 3 Now on to the next one!

battles were good :) can't wait to see lyra win against lance and reconciliate with him the same for clair and lance too x)

I'm curious to see how things will turn out with Jacob, I find his addition to the story very interesting

Oh, yeah, battle! Battle?...battle...?
Don't worry the battle scene is good lmao.

I think that's Lyra should lose the fight for the first time. Lance should make her travel with him and help her out in the long run. Also make her understand something. Her own Gabite and Shelgon should evolve as well.