Liked the condition you added to Order 66 instead of outright removing it.

Also liked your way of teaching them and the bits about giving them a movie to watch.

Little bit of fluffly drama to build up your character.

Fun to read and im not sering any Gary stu moments here. You should be wary of what tech you introduce since it will ultimately end up in Palpatines hands or the Separatists. Remember they have good spies and agents.

The start was weird. But once I understood they were sort of visions then my confusion went away.

Dont have any strong critiques about it except that annoying *sigh* that you added there but otherwise it starts out nice.

I really like the summary and hope this stays separate from either Jedi or the Sith wannabes.

Consider this watched.

This is very confusing and feels rushed my friend.

Cool

I would advise you read very highly reviewed self insert stories to gain a deeper understanding of how the genre should be written. At this point I'm guessing this is more of a crack fic?

Well this seems both confusing and interesting? Also since the summary says it's AU what are the chances of stuff not from SW verse. Like Gear from Halo and or ME maybe even stuff from our world?