| Reviews for Rise of a Champion |
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   TheCrazedValkyrie chapter 6 . 7/15 oooh |
| Dragon of Yin and Yang chapter 6 . 12/19/2018 Great story! Can’t wait to read the next chapter. |
| Guest chapter 4 . 6/26/2018 Please update this. It’s fantastic so far and I don’t see many errors. One thing I would think about changing is the time spent focusing on training. You don’t really write about it but I think you should think about it |
| anarion87 chapter 6 . 6/22/2018 nice so far |
| Guest chapter 6 . 5/28/2017 Absolutely amazing |
| DRAGONWORKS chapter 6 . 5/9/2017 Ooh, I hope you update sometime! |
| Boby335 chapter 6 . 5/5/2017 This is pretty good! I really hope you continue with this. It's refreshing to see Ash get some Pokemon he doesn't usually get in stories. Anyways I would suggest reading over your story before you post it just to make sure you don't have any misplaced or misspelled words or even try and find a beta reader because they help out immensely |
| jesasaurus93 chapter 6 . 4/23/2017 I love this story. I hope you update again soon. |
| 1995hzq chapter 6 . 4/17/2017 Larvitar, Pidgeotto, Beedrill, Magikarp, Nidoran, Abra, Charmeleon and Machop. Wicked team, just need the squirtle line for the complete starter set. Can't wait for your next chapter. |
| 1995hzq chapter 1 . 4/16/2017 Awesome first chapter. Now reading the next 5 chapters. |
| AnimeFreak71777 chapter 6 . 4/19/2017 :D |
| Guest chapter 1 . 4/14/2017 Awesome start...great story though...a very different starter though but a great one...larvitar are very heavy pokemon i guess u were inspired by anime that he could easily picck it up... Great team building ...a little more focus on training would be awesome means an involment...money transactions are a great addition as well as tms... |
| rockingchampif chapter 6 . 4/14/2017 Awesome story though...a very different but an awesome not many has used larvitar as his starter to be a champion or a master u definitely need an awesome starter ...great introductions of money and tms...i guess u were inspired by anime larvitar are very heavy cannot be lifted easily... A little more focus on training and detail on that would be awesome ...but none the less story looks very promising and a great team build up apart from beedril ...bugs are not my fav types... |
| Guest chapter 6 . 3/27/2017 Great story. However please stop using whilst. Use while instead. |
| Dragonsrule18 chapter 6 . 3/28/2017 This story is absolutely amazing! I love Ash's team and how this story seems to combine the anime and the games in a great way. Ash is smarter and stronger, but not so overpowered that it makes him unrealistic. I can't wait to see what you do next and I'm definitely favoriting this story and putting it in my community! |
