| Reviews for Unforeseen Duty |
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Guest chapter 16 . 9/29/2019 Spero continuerai questa storia. |
MadamigellaSnape chapter 2 . 12/22/2018 Interesting take on the concept! I like where it is going but find it a little choppy with some minor spelling/grammar errors. If you're ever interested in a beta... |
Blue night fairy chapter 16 . 11/24/2018 I think this story is fine. It has direction. It about the journey of Severus and Hermiones relationship and its just starting to get interesting. Maybe reread this story yourself and don't change it too much. It doesn't need it. The next chapter maybe write about Hermione telling Serverus about the baby and then follow the pair as their relationship grows and develops. I think that's a fine story. Keep writing and update soon. |
Robin1214 chapter 16 . 11/17/2018 Please update soon |
DeLovelyRose chapter 16 . 7/11/2018 I’m so excited for all the changes you’ll make |
DeLovelyRose chapter 16 . 7/11/2018 I’m so happy you’re getting on board and fighting through writers block |
Guest chapter 16 . 7/2/2018 Hi there! Glad to see you back |
emjrabbitwolf chapter 5 . 7/2/2018 Was not Occulamency going to be used as a cover for their weekly engagements? So they could Urm, spend time doing both activities as it were. Additionally, I wonder when Hermione is going to tell Snape about her lack of experience? I wonder how much Severus has in your tale. Some have him a virtual monk following Lily’s death, other he’s a seducer who has a health sex life, but no connection to his bed partners. Maybe the next few chapters will explain. |
RhodaBush chapter 16 . 7/1/2018 Thank you |
Steffy4s3 chapter 16 . 7/1/2018 I will still be here. |
Guest chapter 16 . 7/1/2018 Your author's note is written in computer code. |
FrancineHibiscus chapter 16 . 7/1/2018 It's your story! I'll be waiting for whatever you offer :) |
DeLovelyRose chapter 15 . 5/30/2018 She pregnant! Omg can’t wait for the next chapter! |
dethwatch chapter 15 . 5/29/2018 OMG PLEASE update soon this is amazing |
DeLovelyRose chapter 1 . 5/29/2018 Poor Hermione;( I hope Lucius dies a horrible death |