Reviews for Unforeseen Duty |
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![]() ![]() Spero continuerai questa storia. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Interesting take on the concept! I like where it is going but find it a little choppy with some minor spelling/grammar errors. If you're ever interested in a beta... |
![]() ![]() ![]() I think this story is fine. It has direction. It about the journey of Severus and Hermiones relationship and its just starting to get interesting. Maybe reread this story yourself and don't change it too much. It doesn't need it. The next chapter maybe write about Hermione telling Serverus about the baby and then follow the pair as their relationship grows and develops. I think that's a fine story. Keep writing and update soon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Please update soon |
![]() ![]() ![]() I’m so excited for all the changes you’ll make |
![]() ![]() ![]() I’m so happy you’re getting on board and fighting through writers block |
![]() ![]() Hi there! Glad to see you back |
![]() ![]() ![]() Was not Occulamency going to be used as a cover for their weekly engagements? So they could Urm, spend time doing both activities as it were. Additionally, I wonder when Hermione is going to tell Snape about her lack of experience? I wonder how much Severus has in your tale. Some have him a virtual monk following Lily’s death, other he’s a seducer who has a health sex life, but no connection to his bed partners. Maybe the next few chapters will explain. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thank you |
![]() ![]() ![]() I will still be here. |
![]() ![]() Your author's note is written in computer code. |
![]() ![]() ![]() It's your story! I'll be waiting for whatever you offer :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() She pregnant! Omg can’t wait for the next chapter! |
![]() ![]() ![]() OMG PLEASE update soon this is amazing |
![]() ![]() ![]() Poor Hermione;( I hope Lucius dies a horrible death |