*cries
It was SO GOOD! keep up the good work!

This was... So good... Too good to even explain.
It was sad, so sad that I sympathize for every character in the story, (except for Boruto, i personally do not like that little shit.) Anyways that was a really good story, keep up the good work. :)

*Nara family feels intensify* :')

I'm so happy to read a fic where they all love each other so unconditionally

Thanks for sharing and writing this beautiful piece!

BEAUTIFUL!
Write more:)

sure that it will only stay as a OS? It is really good and could become a great multi-chapter fic

Man. That was tense. I felt like I was on the edge of my seat! Then what of Temari's condition? Will she really be paralyzed?

Man. That was tense. I felt like I was on the edge of my seat! Then what of Temari's condition? Will she really be paralyzed?

It was sooo moving! I loved it, and second the idea of making it a two shot

Got me heartbroken af but I loved it VERY much. You go easily with the dialogs I love that too. Forget it I love everything about this!

Why don't you make of this story a Two Shot, it would be very cute to see those two with Temari, and what abour her legs? Would she be able to walk again? Please do another chapter.

This was so beautiful and real!
I love ShikaTema Shikadai family!

Thank you for writing this text, I really liked it. Very emotional and well-written, good job !

Omg i totally love it

That's a very nice little oneshot to read. Was a bit afraid here myself. But thanks for the good ending.