| Reviews for Up in the Clouds |
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   notvisiulebliss chapter 1 . 4/24 Was cool up until the swamp fruit part then starting to lose my interest... Good first start though just not for me |
| NazgulBelserion chapter 1 . 8/31/2019 Really thats your favorite fruit fkin weirdo lol |
| LeBomb chapter 2 . 6/11/2019 pls tell me he knows canon |
| P34644563 chapter 1 . 2/14/2019 didn't this mc ever watch one piece it kind sounds like he did but then he goes and eats a random devil fruit. Anyone who watched one piece knows that's not a smart move. |
| BlackDove WhiteDove chapter 2 . 1/5/2018 xD hahahaha |
| Some Guy In An Ambulance chapter 1 . 9/26/2017 Holy crap! You actually killed people! You insane bastard! One Piece is a shounen manga where no one could possibly die! Where friendship reigns supreme! Where a punch strong enough to demolish buildings only knock a marine unconscious! Bravo! Don't see enough OP fanfictions that take the grimdark reality of the OP world seriously. Like being a pirate is always glorified, that none of them kill anyone. Hell, Ace vaporizes like a dozen marines at the Marineford battle. Like the White Beard Pirates are a force for all that is good. Nah, they're pirates, sure they've got a moral compass, but they still kill and steal. Thank you for addressing the elephant in the room! |
| king gilgamesh chapter 4 . 9/20/2017 Its foolish really he had a choice of stay with his parents gain strength and skills or go with shanks. The decision made by your MC or direction of the story is a huge turn off |
| king gilgamesh chapter 4 . 9/20/2017 the reason yoy are struggling with the story is because your MC is making silly mistakes when he is supposed to be smarter than that. Its embarrasing really |
| Zazg chapter 4 . 9/17/2017 Good story... and you just give it up.. omg.. |
| Jpug chapter 1 . 9/17/2017 I'm sorry to hear you stopping the story it had an interesting premise and I might have a go and doing it myself with your blessing though I hope your creative mind doesn't lose hope in your story telling just keep working out your ideas and you'll get there. |
| Guest chapter 1 . 8/11/2017 Down in the muck ? |
| Guest chapter 3 . 8/5/2017 You should have changed your title when you changed his devil fruit. |
| Reptil chapter 3 . 8/2/2017 Can't wait for the next chapter keep it up |
| LuminaCarina chapter 3 . 7/9/2017 Oh I love Shakky, I love her so much, and she really shines in this fic! Shanks too is really awesome and irresponsible, just how I like him. And Walter gets to meet Luffy! Yay! Thank you for posting, this was a really interesting read; you have a really good grasp on the characters! |
| KidDeath23 chapter 1 . 5/23/2017 Another great chapter. So whats next jon snow or whatcraft? |
