Cute!

So, why does everyone say starts instead of God or something? Like it's always "Oh, my stars." Even when they were on Earth they said it. Why is that?

For some reason I found this story so funny. My sister came into my room and asked if I had inhaled Joker gas which made me laugh harder because my sister knows almost nothing and DC comics.

Can't wait to see what you write next: ) more soon please: ) great stuff: )

As usual your stories lift me up when I'm feeling a little blue. These three chapters were perfect. Especially since last week I was sick and didn't have a voice. I loved all the references even though I didn't get a lot of them. I'm not much of a gamer. And of the songs, I only knew Lady Gaga

Yaaaaay so sweet and cute and fluffy and funny! And also is it bad that despite how happy this made me I'm excited for the angst? lol can't wait! Great job again!

What do you mean by 'another wave of angst'? Haven't the poor Paladin's gone through enough? Just kidding! Keep the amazing stories coming! I love reading them! Also, will Haggar eventually find out that Keith is related to her?

Awww, this was great! Okay, I'm ready for the angst now. :D

Oh my gosh, did Shiro just call Keith 'Nightcrawler'? That's perfect. :D I was laughing the whole time I read this chapter! I'm hope Beyris didn't hear all of the swearing over the sound system, or else everyone's gonna get a lecture later head boop was adorable. Okay, I've been seeing this thing about Shiro being 6 everywhere, but I never really understood it. I do now! XD I just never paid attention to the significance of his birthday. :D

I liked it. But, ( There's always a 'but' with me) the F words, I don't think were needed. The first one, I just shrugged off, but the other ones, it was like okay, what on earth? But, it's your story, so, you can do what ever you want, I just thought the F words weren't needed...

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