I've never really felt a want or need to post a review. I've read some good to great stories on this site. Maybe I should have to thank the author. This story though has been hands-down glorious. A ex of mine I am still good friends with has an account and sent me the story awhile back. Now that I'm "furloughed" due to this virus business, I have all the time in the world to read.

I finally checked the link and started reading yesterday evening. Well, here we are today and I just finished. I couldn't put it down. I feel asleep last night reading it, but don't think of that as I was bored. I just refused to put it down. I rose this morning and re-read what I had pushed myself to read through last night and fished your story. I don't know what game you are running, but you are a fantastic writer. The amount of care you put into this story and the characters stories and feelings and emotion and the amount of time with all of the detail that you must have spent, this is truly a work of art. Now, I'm going to get some food and relieve myself because I've been on the couch for the better part of all of today. I noticed that there is a follow-on, so that's next.

Seriously, thanks for writing such a wonderful story and taking the time and effort to do so. It's greatly appreciated. It's been tough being out of work for the time being and trying to find other work to keep things moving, but this story and these characters, just all of it has helped a lot. Can't wait to find out what happens next!

This is hands down my favorite fanfic that I've ever had the pleasure of reading, and I'm an extremely picky reader. I Discovered "Children of Akatosh" forst, and after reading the first chapter, followed buy the author's notes, I instantly came to find this. I expect that it too will be right next to this one in my top 5. I really appreciate your work.

Reading this has helped me feel some happiness in my spell of depression as of late. Reading the next accompanying story is sure to do the same, and I can't wait to get started.

May your typing hands be swift, and your mind full of endless inspiration... And once again, thank you so very much for this work of art!

I don't read much but I must say, reading this story makes me feel like you're actually a professional writer because the flow of the story and the choice of words is just beyond my expectations. This wasn't the first fanfiction involving the dragonborn and Serana that I read but this certainly is the best and to my disappointment, this story did not receive nearly as many favourites as the other fanfiction that I read before this. Anyway, I hope writing this kind of things just because you like doing so is enough to make you write more. Thank you for the great story

Amazing ending still wish there was a more carnal part but you managed to pull it together without needing it thats amazing great job.

I love this story I've been reading through the past few days amazing job, amazing characters you really bring out the best and real qualities that Bethesda unfortunately didnt or couldn't amazing job, after reading the ending of this chapter hes an ass lol

I'm really liking this story great job.

Best ES fic I've read. Looking forward to reading your next one on this story. Well done.

At the very end, don't you mean Akatosh?

I have been very impressed so far. This story and the additions you have made to the story characters is complex but in a good way. I am not bored. The fight scenes are great.

Started the first chapter and thought it was just another rando follow the game story plot fan fiction for skyrim. I almost did not go on despite a few things I saw in the first chapter that were neat. I am glad I kept going. this is good and the main character does not seem like the dragonborn characters you see in other fictions where they seem to be in a constant "god-mode" game cheat state. Part with the dragon was really cool and I'm going to keep reading this.

Wow. Just wow. This was a great action packed chapter.

Whoa, the battle got intense. Wonder what Serana will do now since Ketar locked her out.

"Lydia would undoubtedly stand with them, and probably the jackass with her downstairs too"
LOL! Never thought Brynjolf as an ass but that's great haha
"I know you're curious, and yes—the headboard is still intact."
This had me laughing so hard I cried.
Love the pairing between Lydia and Bryn, didn't see that one coming but a nice touch. Still wondering what went down in Riften though!

The song serena sang was beautiful

Liked your version of the Soul Cairn Keepers fight